Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Sep 1, 2005.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Kash maine tumhe itna chaha na hota
    Bhagwan se tumhe har dua me manga na hota
    Toh shayad is dil ko dard kam hota
    Jab kabhi tu mere kareeb na hota

    Dil sochta hai tujhe har din har raat
    Batati hun tujhe is dil ki har baat
    Toh kya hua agar tu nahi hai mere sath
    Lagta toh aise hi hai ki tere hathoan me hi hai mera hath

    Tujhe mehsoos karne ke liye mujhe tere sath ki zaroorat nahi
    Yeh hawa ehsas dilati hai mujhe ki tu yahi hai kahin
    Shayad hi koi pal aisa ayega jab sahi mayino me tu hoga yahi
    Par tere liye mera pyar us lamhe ka mohtaj nahi
  2. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Hey guys....gud to b here, where I can share what I have been piling up for all these days. Do let me kno if its(my poems) ok...
  3. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    good one!!!
  4. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    ah...yet another good 1 garima..impressive! now i gotta rep u.. waiting to read more of ur piled up stuff :)

  5. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    nice one....reps for u
  6. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    NO its not good at all ...
    i dont like the attitude of the poem ... :mad:

    but the poem is nice though ...
  7. $AINT

    $AINT Banned

    Kya aankhen hai
    kya chehra tumne paaya ...
    Aisa lagta hai jaise peepal ke ped se
    Bhoot utar aaya ...
  8. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    wow garima....very nice......
  9. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Hey thanx for liking it.....& those who dint like the 'attitude' of the poem....well, this poem exactly represents my feeling for some1....i kno its sad, but thats how life is....& lemme tell u that even afte writing such a poem I hv loads of Attitude.
  10. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    many ppl say that ...

    but as they say
  11. shak

    shak Harrr!

    hey this is gooood .. no kiddin .. it didnt rhyme much ..didnt had the flow too ..but its from the heart .... adn it certainly touched mine .... a bit of the same sorta story goin on here as well dear ... hahaha
  12. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Hey Shahrukh...thanx yaar....I know its really painful to be in such a situation. I hope atleast u get out of it happily ASAP, cos i kno my situation is neva gonna change:(
    Its been going on with me for the past 8 yrs. During the last one yr. the situation has gone worst, cant say whether wat i did was rite or rong...but atleast now he knows that there is some1 as crazy as me (for him)
    And aftr everythng that happenned there's just one thng that comes in my mind....' Jane kyun log pyar karte hain? Jane kyun woh kissi pe marte hain? Jane kyun....Jane kyu....?????'
  13. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    ok .... since u have raised the question ....
    the answer is ... ummm i cannot find any proper answer ...

    so now the onus is on you to provide an answer ...
  14. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Who ME..???? @ssslayer use some amount of ur brain yaar,,,,,if i ever knew the answer....Y the hell u think I would hv askd this question????
  15. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    umm to tell u the truth ... i had to give u some amount ... since i saw u had nil :grin: (u have already forgotten - u ingrate :p:)
    and now i miss my brain ... I WANT IT BACK :annoyed:

    so that i can think and come up with an answer ... *phew* ...
  16. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    too good garima.. it reminds me gulzar's lyrics " mera kuch saman ".. I really like the way gulzar expresses the feelings of a young lady departing from his lover..
  17. abhi_lovespooja

    abhi_lovespooja New Member

    hey garima
    today i ve read ur poem Love is.... its really amaizing
    this is somewat my kinda feelin' but since i m not a good poet as well as not a good lover
    (thats why she didnt love me )
    but always wanted to write something exactly like this for her but cudnt
    hope u will get whatever u want in ur life......
    i like ur poem so much tat i cudnt help myself from staring some more kinda stuff from
    u and ten i find Kash...... another good stuff written by u...
    aftr reading Kash.... i ve decided to reply u
    One more thing
    Plz yaar aisa kuch aur mat likhna
    kahin aisa na ho ki mujhe tum se pyar ho jaye.....
    wish for love, peace and harmony in ur life
  18. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    ^ duh!?

    internet pe pyar?
  19. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    modify ur post before dharmatma sees it....
  20. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    POOOJA ka kya hoga bhai ????? :shock:

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