Kash maine tumhe itna chaha na hota Bhagwan se tumhe har dua me manga na hota Toh shayad is dil ko dard kam hota Jab kabhi tu mere kareeb na hota Dil sochta hai tujhe har din har raat Batati hun tujhe is dil ki har baat Toh kya hua agar tu nahi hai mere sath Lagta toh aise hi hai ki tere hathoan me hi hai mera hath Tujhe mehsoos karne ke liye mujhe tere sath ki zaroorat nahi Yeh hawa ehsas dilati hai mujhe ki tu yahi hai kahin Shayad hi koi pal aisa ayega jab sahi mayino me tu hoga yahi Par tere liye mera pyar us lamhe ka mohtaj nahi
Hey guys....gud to b here, where I can share what I have been piling up for all these days. Do let me kno if its(my poems) ok...
ah...yet another good 1 garima..impressive! now i gotta rep u.. waiting to read more of ur piled up stuff tahda!!
Hey thanx for liking it.....& those who dint like the 'attitude' of the poem....well, this poem exactly represents my feeling for some1....i kno its sad, but thats how life is....& lemme tell u that even afte writing such a poem I hv loads of Attitude.
hey this is gooood .. no kiddin .. it didnt rhyme much ..didnt had the flow too ..but its from the heart .... adn it certainly touched mine .... a bit of the same sorta story goin on here as well dear ... hahaha
Hey Shahrukh...thanx yaar....I know its really painful to be in such a situation. I hope atleast u get out of it happily ASAP, cos i kno my situation is neva gonna change Its been going on with me for the past 8 yrs. During the last one yr. the situation has gone worst, cant say whether wat i did was rite or rong...but atleast now he knows that there is some1 as crazy as me (for him) And aftr everythng that happenned there's just one thng that comes in my mind....' Jane kyun log pyar karte hain? Jane kyun woh kissi pe marte hain? Jane kyun....Jane kyu....?????'
ok .... since u have raised the question .... the answer is ... ummm i cannot find any proper answer ... so now the onus is on you to provide an answer ...
Who ME..???? @ssslayer use some amount of ur brain yaar,,,,,if i ever knew the answer....Y the hell u think I would hv askd this question????
umm to tell u the truth ... i had to give u some amount ... since i saw u had nil :grin: (u have already forgotten - u ingrate and now i miss my brain ... I WANT IT BACK :annoyed: so that i can think and come up with an answer ... *phew* ...
too good garima.. it reminds me gulzar's lyrics " mera kuch saman ".. I really like the way gulzar expresses the feelings of a young lady departing from his lover..
hey garima today i ve read ur poem Love is.... its really amaizing this is somewat my kinda feelin' but since i m not a good poet as well as not a good lover (thats why she didnt love me ) but always wanted to write something exactly like this for her but cudnt hope u will get whatever u want in ur life...... i like ur poem so much tat i cudnt help myself from staring some more kinda stuff from u and ten i find Kash...... another good stuff written by u... aftr reading Kash.... i ve decided to reply u One more thing Plz yaar aisa kuch aur mat likhna kahin aisa na ho ki mujhe tum se pyar ho jaye..... wish for love, peace and harmony in ur life abhi...