Vo life pe lecture suna kar gaya, bade bade funde bata kar gaya, badi mehnat se sulaya tha jis tanhaaii ko jate jate vo uss ko jaga kar gaya... nange paoon chale the hum raahe mohaabat vo moje pehnana sikha kar gaya... itna lambi to na thi dasstane zindagi jitna lamba vo trailer dikha ke gaya... mujh ko khud bhi nahi yaad bhuut khuch magar ye sach hia vo sab kuch bhula kar gaya...
Nice. I love these two lines nange paoon chale the hum raahe mohaabat vo moje pehnana sikha kar gaya... They strike me as really funny. I see a lot of humour in your poems. This is the kind of story that Kal Ho Na Ho potrayed in a way I guess.