Kaho Yeh Din

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by rizaaj, Dec 22, 2004.

  1. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    hey buddies, check out my first urdu/hindi song.. i have made a composition and a nice classical song of it... but cant find out appropriate chords to fit in it....

    here it goes

    Kaho ye din Tumhari yaadon mein hum kaisay guzarein
    kaho is raat tumhari baaton ko hum kaisay bhula dein

    ye dil, ye jaan , tumhari hai
    hamari saans , tumhari hai

    har aik lamha wo guzrey pal humein phir kyon sataein
    Kaho ye din tumhari yaadon mein hum kaisay guzarein


    next stanzas are secret.... :cool:


    so how was it.... any thing u suggest....
     
  2. jayanth

    jayanth <.: : Call Quits : :.>

    Its cool..
     
  3. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    thanx Buddy
     
  4. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Nice poem rizaaj:)
     
  5. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    THanks Dist......
     
  6. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    next stanzas are secret ?? any particular reason ?? or even that is a secret ?? LOL ... anyway good lyrics.
     
  7. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    yes the reason behind this is that, if God lets me then im gonna release my album in july 2006 and this will be a part of that album
     
  8. adnanshakil

    adnanshakil New Member

    Very Nice Rizaaj, I like the poem as well as the idea of releasing your album.. I have seen your other posts.. You are doing a good job! Keep it up!
     
  9. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Well done Rizaaj!
    Okay, I'll try to find out the chords.
     
  10. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    thanks Sanjay... plz gimme the chords too if you can ... i ll try to send you its tune
     
  11. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

    I can't make a fair comment because i don't know what it means....translate for me PLEASE????
     
  12. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    Kaho ye din Tumhari yaadon mein hum kaisay guzarein
    tell me, how should i spend my days in your memories

    kaho is raat tumhari baaton ko hum kaisay bhula dein
    tell me, that how shud i forget your conversations

    ye dil, ye jaan , tumhari hai
    my heart, my life, is all yours

    hamari saans , tumhari hai
    my breath, is also yours

    har aik lamha wo guzrey pal humein phir kyon sataein
    then why,those past moments, are disturbing me

    Kaho ye din tumhari yaadon mein hum kaisay guzarein
    tell me, how should i spend my days in your memories

    just rought go at it.. dont mind silly translation....

    by the way i wasn't expecting a reply after almost a month...lolz
     
  13. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

    nice words, I enjoyed it...sorry about the long wait for this reply...hey! I just got here!
    You keep it up.
     
  14. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Nice work Rizaaj:) Cool stuff mate;)
     
  15. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    thanks Rey and Disturbed :D
     

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