Kabira's dohe.... revised versions...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nils, May 1, 2007.

  1. nils

    nils New Member

    Hi,

    I modified some `dohe' or duplets of Kabir and Rahim to fit for corporate culture !

    Agar aaj ke zamaane mein dohe likhe jaate to kuchh aise hi hote :grin:


    Kabir :
    Pothhi padh padh jag mooya, pandit bhaya na koye,
    Dhai aakhar prem ka, padhe so pandit hoye
    Nilay :
    Coding kar ar jag mooya, programmer bhaya na koye,
    Do shabd copy-paste ke, kare so programmer hoye.

    Kabir :
    Chalati chakki dekh ke, diya Kabira roye,
    Do paatan ke beechmein, saabut bacha na koye
    Nilay :
    Client aur manager ko dekhke, engineers saare roye,
    Deadline meet karne ke chakkar mein, saabut bacha na koye.

    Kabir :
    Aisi baani boliye, man ka aapa khoye
    Auron ko sheetal kare, aaphi sheetal hoye
    Nilay :
    Aisa presentation dijiye, man ka aapa khoye,
    Auron ko confuse kare, aaphi confuse hoye

    Kabir :
    Guru Govind doyu khade, kaake laagu paye
    Balihari guru aapke, govind diyo bataye
    Nilay :
    Client aur manager doyu khade, kaake laagu paye
    Balihaari client aapke, manager diyo bataye.

    Rahim :
    Rahiman dhaaga prem ka, mat todo chatkaye
    tode se fir jude na, jude gaanth pad jaaye
    Nilay :
    Nilayan confidence manager, mat todo chatkaye
    Project to barbaad hoye hi, appraisal mein waat lag jaye.

    Kabir :
    Dheere dheere re mana, dheere sab kuch hoye,
    Maali seenche sow ghara, ritu aaye phal hoye
    Nilay :
    Dheere dheere re project leader, dheere project execute hoye,
    client dikhaye kitni bhi urgency, release deadline ke baad hi hoye..

    Kabir :
    Jab Tun Aaya Jagat Mein, Log Hanse Tu Roye
    Aise Karni Na Kari, Pache Hanse Sab Koye
    Nilay :
    Jab project aaye company mein, client hase hum roye,
    Aisi karni na kari, tu hase client roye...

    Kabir :
    Dukh Mein Simran Sab Kare, Sukh Mein Kare Na Koye
    Jo Sukh Mein Simran Kare, Tau Dukh Kahe Ko Hoye
    Nilay :
    Rush hour mein kaam sab karen, routine mein kare na koye,
    jo routine mein sab kaam kare, to rush hour kaahe hoye.

    Kabir :
    Chinta Aisee Dakini, Kat Kaleja Khaye
    Vaid Bichara Kya Kare, Kahan Tak Dawa Lagaye
    Nilay :
    Deadline aisi dakini, man ka tension badhaaye,
    kaam itna ho sar par, time pe complete kaise ho paaye.

    Kabir :
    Maala To Kar Mein Phire, Jeebh Phire Mukh Mahin
    Manua To Chahun Dish Phire, Yeh To Simran Nahin
    Nilay :
    Engineer gaye sab cigarette peene, Leader phire office maahin,
    Cubicle se jyaada time canteen pe rahe, yeh to dedication naahin





    comments please...
     
  2. Ankur_Scorpio

    Ankur_Scorpio New Member

    LOL! Awesome modified versions!!!
     
  3. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    good one :p
     
  4. angel_of_sin

    angel_of_sin bassist.....

    hehehheheheheheh...............phew i hve already read sum of dese bt man dey r awesum..............................
     
  5. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    IT jokes r all the same to me.. and equally boring.
     

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