this poem below is by my friend. i wont tell n e more...than that ....ofcourse he writes a 1000 times better than me.... Kaash... I looked back into my past and the things i missed and lost the jokes i laughed at, things which i can never forget. this tale suits a girl... i loved from my heart n soul. I wanted her to b my light... when theres no shadow; coz shes my tomorrow. I wanted her to b mine and brighten my thoughts, when there's no sunshine. I was in delusion, about her word "penchant". It blurred my vision, and swapped "friendship" by the word "relation". this thought... like a dart, quashed her affable heart. she was always ahead of me, I ran with a blooded knee, I tried to join her walk, but she always tried to balk. What is the reason? i keep on asking... she keeps on finding an excuse, and always trying to refuse. i always wanted to confess whatever I've got to express, is not to impress. wherever we go in our life I'll carry her in my heart.. n her beautiful smile... helps me cover each mile... with a smile. those unforgettable moments which we spent together, puts me into a silent thought kaaash i could get back to the days we fought. i hope one day i ll b with her again somehow, sometime, someplace. now its your turn to express... there's is one more which i got...shall i post it in this thread itself or in a new one...do suggest.
next thread and this 1 was nice ..but see how u verse the lines......may be its rap..and if its so use, ; etc to make it look like that ......accha effort turly
i feel it should've been given another title.. maybe "If only"..or something else in english but its the poets decision so I dont/shouldnt have a problem.. the poems wonderful loved the lines "I was in delusion, about her word "penchant". It blurred my vision, and swapped "friendship" by the word "relation". this thought... like a dart, quashed her affable heart."
reality hurts..............but no doubt imagination is real on paper through words....keep on moving with nice thoughts..life is differnt if we stop and look back and wait for ........................kaash............. rohit astroguru26
