justice in heaven.......

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Dec 31, 2005.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member


    new thoughts about the concept.....i died and went in heaven....

    knocked on the heavens door,
    welcome drink and bottle of champagne.
    soon the bell rung,
    someone called my ancestors name.

    handed a chit and allowed to enter,
    saw visually impaired working as gardener.
    looked ahead beautiful garlands,
    watched the new faces and fresh entrants.

    heard clamouring of peoples
    crying and crossing the decibels.
    thought may be there is test.
    or might be the demons feast.

    noone was with me
    to look after and to see
    i was alone walking
    with the fear treading

    reached the place
    found myself as stranger .
    panel of judges blaming me,
    noone except as me as defender.

    finally they decided about me,
    checked the past report.
    allowed to ask for pardon,
    but me unfazed and no to retort.

    called a hangman bind by rope,
    permiited to blurt anything in mind.
    i prayed for all of them
    whom i know before dying on ground.

    devils laughed on me
    i cried but cannot escape.
    with promise of more happiness,
    they hanged me till death.........

  2. PakPride

    PakPride New Member

    I loved it!...Kind of depressing though but that sets the mood. Awesome job...likhtay raho!

    P.S. --> I'll pray that you go to Heaven! :)
  3. har1s

    har1s <b>Untitled</b>

    hey dude nice goin... n nice topic u got there.. !
  4. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    me too..loved it...
    i hope u go to heaven as pakpride says....
    but if u going to hell..i can give company to you... ;)
    after all wherever a person like u goes its heaven already... :beer:
  5. metal_fan69

    metal_fan69 To Live Is To Die

    good work...
  6. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    thanks for your appreciation............

  7. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    noone likes.............humour


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