hi... posting my poetry titled as JOURNEY... Emotional closeness now... i fear to walk on that path.. whose stones are surrounded by lovely memories.. as i was robbed off my sensitivity by those untrusted faithlessnes.. with time as bridge come closes... gap between the so called one soul... the attention gets more cleared... the pores becomes evident... smiles gets into sarcasm , the silky touch becomes rare.. the love goes into backyard.... never to come back... waited..till i heard the smile...not for me... never for me.... loosing the innocence... taking the heartbreak with my stride... continue my journey... rohit astroguru26
dude...its excellent..."love goes into backyard", "heard the smile", "loosing the innocence"...you have really portrait it very very well.
