Jesus Dont Want...(nirvana) by ViNi

^ LOL
No: Niravana isnt even remotely connected to "MurdaMetal"

What he says is generically true, if you spend even 15minutes sifting thru Nirvana's material.


OK coming back to your recording. Good. It is definitly better than the previous one where th evocals were drowned.

These Laptop speaker dont reproduce the sounds very well though. Hey why not add a metronome sound while you are recording? That will allow you to keep tight within the beat.

 

@fat_kax fuck you too bro :grin: Nirvana pretty much sucked and is an overhyped band.
@vinny, murda metal anyday better than nirvana. Heck, even Barenaked ladies were better than nirvana.

 

when on earth...did i say nirvana is related to murda metal?? :shock:

i said distu doesnt like nirvana coz he likes death metal....does that mean nirvana is connected wid "murda metal" lolzz..

i didnt even convey anything to be read between the lines anyways thanx for the appreciation,,and wish i had a laptop! umm.. i have a beeeeg desktop

 

Ok..fine! im not a nirvana fan either..just like a song or two. No shyt! i'd say nirvana is overhyped because many nirvana buffs committed suicide coz Kurt Cobain did...eeeh! anyways Bye

 

Kurt Cobain did suicide? I thought he committed it :grin:

Anyway, vini, why do u care what others think? it's ok if u like nirvana.

And abt the recording, your voice sounds extremely good! I loved it! Try using a metronome next time or practice playing along with the song. Or better yet, play the song on ur headset and record while u play along!

 

thanx for pointing that out...point noted ^ it seems u enjoy pointing out others mistake heehe..good! have fun

and thanx for ur feedback!

 

sweet as.. well honey.. which u can buy instead of apricots.. lol

 

is that a feedback for my cover or my signature? :think:

 

well i'd say the song, but a bit abt the signature as well.. but then maybe mostly abt U..

 

well - i hate to admit this....but yeh

:rock: Barenakedladies :rock:​

but dude disturbed,,,,i dunno man - kurt dude was a real cool junkhed musician,,,

 

nirvana was cool, kurt had a cool voice n their melodies were brilliant in their simplessness. BUT they had shit lyrics. made no sense.

 

sorry, i am a bit busy, vini .. will check out the song later and will comment on it

 

Alrightyyy!!!...even if u dont then also Alrightyyy

 

Well all i can say is that strumming was good but you need to improve on the vocal front.
it seemed to me that your throat needs to be opened up a little bit more.....it may sound critical but thats wat i feel

 

As promised, I am back

I havent heard the original song recently... *shoves out the ext harddrive*

Some remarks:
Positives - Your strumming and your voice is flawless.
Negatives - Bad recording (sounds like a friggin bumble bee flying around . Also, try "finger picking" the intro & outro, it will sound a bit smooth.

Keep it up ! I hope I have provided some valuable feedback.

 

The guitar doesn't sound full enough - I presume thats the recording to be honest, or that you aren't playing it hard enough hehe. It's still good though - good solid strumming and the lead really brought it to life.

As for the singing - your tone is lovely, very very sweet sounding. It just seems you lack confidence... you need to "shout" (if you know what I mean) a bit more. Otherwise the potentials all there - your voice is lovely anyway

Good one!

 

@dirt+DJ+fatima

erm...yeah!
i know i lack majorly when it comes to singing and basically "throat needs to be opened up" as dirt_nectar said and thats what (i think) makes it all seem like i lack confidence...that is what :think:
sound quality...well...actually the overlapping spoils it i believe then the amplify effects to add on top of it..will see what i can do about it in my next recording!

and yes guys....i'll practise more before posting another recording next time..plz remain geared up wid ur critical feedback....btw since many days i was wondering that i can kick off wid some voice training classes(when i have time..god knows when iL have it : )..but what exactly..i mean what type of training should i take..any suggestions?

Lastly a big THANX TO ALL of u! :nw:

 

u dnt need classes doll, u need confidence .. ur voice is already tuned in the class of the best, u just got to realise it.. next time ur singing, try to sing as if u've just made ur parents the happiest ppl in the world ( in my experience there's nothin more than that to make u feel on top of the world ) but hey, if u r taking classes then plz let me know which u r taking, i need some as well.. LONG LIVE MUSIC n Musicians! Hail Indian Guitar Tabs! hehehe

 

^^ well for now...im planning to have a good look at the link which sixstringsin has sent me, with singing tips etc,.

if u need that, let me know..i'll pm u!

 

nice stuff..voice is still kiddish as usual! you could have used some vocal processor and added soem distortion to your high tone/clean..., after all.. it could humiliate kurt! heh!