jeevan safal hai mera

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by EP/*rocks*/, Feb 21, 2008.

  1. EP/*rocks*/

    EP/*rocks*/ New Member

    sajan ne haath thaama

    jeevan safal hai mera

    jeevan safal hai mera


    jeevan saara uski yaadein

    baatein thin to uski baatein

    uske binaa chain kahan thaa

    jeevan saara hi sooonaa thaa



    dar dar bhatka uski talash mein

    doondha usko door daraaz mein

    paake ke usko dil mein apne

    chootaa mujhse jag saaraa



    jee bhar ke main usko nihaaroon

    uske charan ko palkan se dabaaoon

    ek pal usse door mein jaaoon

    khud ko jag mein tanha paoon



    kaise usko virha chipaaoon

    kaise uski virha chipaaoon

    ek pal us bin chain naa paoon

    saamne uske chup ho jaaoon


    sajan ne haanth thaama

    jeevan safal hai mera

    jeevan safal hai mera
     
  2. EP/*rocks*/

    EP/*rocks*/ New Member

    koi to bolo
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    this ws not good... i mean may be this is not the place where such stuff can be appriciated........ this was so simple and nothing new !!
     
  4. EP/*rocks*/

    EP/*rocks*/ New Member

    i am not able to undrstnd maduresh !!!!

    wether i have a big flaw in my poetry ???

    or eithr i am in greater level then all IGTians#####
     

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