Jaroorat nahi

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nils, Sep 19, 2006.

  1. nils

    nils New Member

    One of my own writings.... wrote after my break off.... kuch jyaada hi senti ho gaya tha....

    I entitled it as "Jaroorat nahi"


    Din ke ujaale mein, mujhe chhaon ki jaroorat nahi,
    Raat ke andhere mein, mujhe dipak ki jaroorat nahi.

    Apno main bhi begaana hu main, mujhe gairon ki jaroorat nahi,
    Ek bewafa sanam hai mere paas, mujhe dushmano ki jaroorat nahi.

    Pyar mein zakham khaye hai to kya, mujhe malham ki jaroorat nahi,
    Tanhaiyon me hi rehta hun main, mujhe sannate ki jaroorat nahi.

    Dil toot chuka hai, jaan bhi chali jaayegi, mujhe jeene ki jaroorat nahi,
    Meri laash ko yuhin chhod dena, mujhe kabar ki bhi jaroorat nahi.



    comments please......
     
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  2. Seher

    Seher New Member

    It indeed is really a heavy one.. I hope you are out of the negative energy now.. On the poem.. Its nice..
     
  3. nils

    nils New Member

    Thanks for comments. I am ofcourse out now. This happened some 2 years ago. Now i m living a cool life now.... No lovey dovey thing now. But ya, looking back to those things make me wonder how crazy i can get...
     
  4. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    khoob kahaa hai..
    good one!
     
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    hey sab sahi hai bas ye thoda time laga ke nahi likha ..didnt compose well ...
     
  6. good one nils...reps..
     
  7. nils

    nils New Member

    Thanks all for the comments.

    Thanks a lot Madhuresh. I will try to make the composition better next time.
     
  8. nils

    nils New Member

    Where are the reps, Devilshly_Pur$ ????
     
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