HEY FRENZ I know i m not a very good poet but though whenever sum interesting lines strike my mind i jot down on paper and create one of MY POEMS which r often based on the lives around us... Mumbai terror attack has shaken me frm tip to toe n i very heartily wrote a poem...i felt like sharing with u all Main Maa, Apne bachchon ko meri khaatir chhoti chhoti aankhon mein bade bade sapno ko pirote dekha hai Jaan ki bagair parwaah kiye Shaan ke arth ko inhone bas kurbaani se jodna sikha hai Jab bhi main dukhon mein jhulas jaati apne bachchon ko sabse kinare kar aati Sambhal kar.....Sambhal kar Main Maa, apni mamta ko haarne na deti Zindagi aur maut ke beech ki is jung mein apne chaaron taraf maine apno ko jalte dekha apne aachal se apne bachchon ki shavon ko lipte dekha, jinhone meri khaatir apne khun ko mere charno mein nyochhawar kar dala Main Maa, apne khun par garv karti hun meri mamta to aasu bayaan kar jaate parantu main tumhe isse kamzor nahi banana chahti bas isiliye akele mein main aahen bhar liya karti hoon dard ke ghoont pi kar khaamosh rah liya karti hoon Main Maa Bhaarat ........................................... Guys, I wanted a suggestion frm u all tht many more good lines r coming to my mind so should i ammend this poem or let it be so?
It's a sensitive issue to write on and I avoid commenting on poems like these. I think you should write on.
Hey...returned to IGT after long....read ur peice it amazing and very sublte n smooth for the patriotic emotions.I really liked it. There is no end to such emotions.
