Not bad at all, used to play this in our band, its really a nice song! There are some wrong notes played, so try to improve that, the tempo is also very slow, actually the song starts very slow, but the tempo is getting faster after the first lines are played. Its also a pity you didn't played the solo's and the whole song, just wanted to hear the whole song! Overall is this done pretty well, keep going and take care man! Btw, in future post your songs in this section: https://indianguitartabs.com/forumdisplay.php?f=26