Its going to last forever

Another poem from me...

When sky makes earth smile
And you touch your love
You know its fresh and
Its going to last for years

When wind makes ocean laugh
And you kiss your love
You know its real and
Its going to last long

When rain makes night dance
And you love your love
You know its divine and
Its going to last forever

Janta, Please comment!!!

 

short and sweet...sahi hai..

 

thanks man,,,janta ko padi padi poem likh ke pakane ka nahi: I believe in SIS and SIB..short is simple and simple is beautiful

 

Whoah, hah, nice poem ;-) Nice theme infact.

 

thank u @dist...