itnaahi kaafi hai..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nimisha, Jul 6, 2006.

  1. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    i know my life will never be complete, without your love in it..
    but i dont regret..
    its enough for me that..
    atleast i have a complete love for a moment, if not complete life forever!!

    itnaahi kaafi hai..

    Iss pyaar ko koi anjaam na mile..
    Iss rishte ko koi naam na mile..
    jin raaston pe chal rahe hai hum dono..
    shayad, unn raaston pe koi makaam na mile..

    zindagi mukammal ho jaaye ishq se, ye shaukh nahi meraa..
    ishq mukammal hai khud me, bass itnaa hi kaafi hai..

    hum-raahi hai hum dono, hum-dum to nahi..
    par dhadkanon me ye chaahat, kuch kam to nahi..
    judaa honaa hai hum ko, ek din ek ghadi..
    uss waqt kaa par hum ko, aaj gum to nahi..

    zindagi mukammal ho jaaye ishq se, ye shaukh nahi meraa..
    ishq mukammal hai khud me, bass itnaa hi kaafi hai..

    maana ke hothon pe ye aahe na hongi..
    mujhe seene se lagaati, teri baahe na hongi..
    maana ke ajnabi se, ho jaayenge hum dono..
    hum-raahi kehneko, jab yeh raahe bhi na hongi..

    zindagi mukammal ho jaaye ishq se, ye shaukh nahi meraa..
    ishq mukammal hai khud me, bass itnaa hi kaafi hai..
    Babydoll and zoomingrocket like this.
  2. rikkyrocks

    rikkyrocks Banned


    dis is rikkiy,twas really gr8,i appriciate u to become a lyricist.and i m so impressed of dis one.if request u to shake it with nots n rythems,would u let it?actually we gonna make a musical group of two n my buddy,we have written five songs n target is near abt 16 for our 1st enthusiastic show i play guitar n he sings.thaugh both f us write but ur composition is really gr8 n we need to collect n create gud elements for music.
  3. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    best lines....
    Nice lyrics dear...
    Keep writing!

    A "possible" reply to your above composition...

    "Akele hai hum,
    Akele hi ji lenge…
    Aapka saath na ho to,
    Kisika saath na lenge hum…

    Kuch sawal karna chahte the aapse,
    Jinka jawab humhe na pata hai…
    Darrte kyun hai hum,
    Aapko khone se?

    Aakhon mein aasu bhar aate hai,
    Pata na kyun…
    Duur aapse jana hai,
    Ye hum, kaise man le ab?

    Sachai badi kadvi lagti hai,
    Par aapki khushi ke liye ye badi sayani lagti hai…
    Duur rehkar,
    Zinda rahenge aapke dil mein…

    Alvida kehkar,
    Aapke chehre ki muskan nahi khona chahte…
    Kal subah,
    Ek khawab samajkar humko bhula dena…"

  4. sanketdaru

    sanketdaru New Member

    Both the poems, the original n the possible reply, are just too good... keep writing... people like me who cant write so well love readin such beautiful lines and relating their lives to it...

    Nice Work...

    KEEP IT UP!!!
  5. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    @ rikky..
    i absolutely dont mind.. go ahead to add some notes n rhymes in it..
    but the condition is, u shud let me know how it turns out.
    post it on igt soundtrack when u compose it. good luck. n thanks.:rock:

    i knew u'll understand this one very true.
    n ur composition is really good. im so sorry to reply it very late.:eek::
    'alvida' or 'duuriya' might be good title for this poem.
    with simple words n with simple lines, the poem feels very natural..
    just lacks bit continuity... but what the heck.. good one!!:nw:

    with all my heart i wish, noboday cud relate this, with their life.
    its tought to live in such situations..
    thanks for the reply.
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh


    good jane koii humari aduuri kahani..:p:
  7. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    thanks madhuresh..
  8. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    no one to reply more???

    come on people.. itnaahi kaafi nahi!!
  9. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    after almost a decade I stumbled upon the forum again. Getting nostalgic about life back then. Reviving my old forum and post to see those from the past are still here!

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