It Rained Tonight.. Eventide brines a sky clear Its another day another time Everything felt fine But drops of the salty rain Blazed my palm tonight The rain didnt seem to stop But the moments were in flight Chasing away the dark dreams A flicker of light fights The light seemed demure But in darkness burnt the night Light seeped in for want of a shadow Darkness creeped out in fear of light The night bickered with the morn incessant Dillusioned a shadow was clinging to the night Not gloomy nor weary Yet it seemed fazed by the rain And the brightest moon which was out tonight Chissled its outline with the darkest coal The rain fell changing the horizon The rain fell mincing the colored formation But that was on the other side of the world Tonite the rain soaked and water rolled On my side of the world. ---`-,--;--<@ _____________________ You can be honest ..you wont be taxed
Ok tell me honestly....how long did it take you to write this poem? I mean all the words are carefully selected....and lines ate perfectly connected. Wonderful...and fantabulous.
hehe..donno... the last five lines were last minute i'd written this about a month ago..couldnt find an ending.. Thanks thanks..jus havent posted any.. Thanks.. @Notty- um..thanks....never keep me wondering if what u meant was good or bad.. @Garima-Thanks @Hira- Thanks girl... @Arnold_Aj..thanks man! @Manu- its jus that time of the year..and yh..i do like the rain