It Rained Tonight..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by BubblyMartini, Aug 23, 2006.

  1. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    It Rained Tonight..

    Eventide brines a sky clear
    Its another day another time
    Everything felt fine
    But drops of the salty rain
    Blazed my palm tonight
    The rain didnt seem to stop
    But the moments were in flight
    Chasing away the dark dreams
    A flicker of light fights
    The light seemed demure
    But in darkness burnt the night
    Light seeped in for want of a shadow
    Darkness creeped out in fear of light
    The night bickered with the morn incessant
    Dillusioned a shadow was clinging to the night
    Not gloomy nor weary
    Yet it seemed fazed by the rain
    And the brightest moon which was out tonight
    Chissled its outline with the darkest coal
    The rain fell changing the horizon
    The rain fell mincing the colored formation
    But that was on the other side of the world
    Tonite the rain soaked and water rolled
    On my side of the world.



    You can be honest wont be taxed ;)
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  2. g0g0l

    g0g0l ! SpAm

    Wow That woz really nice!!! I enjoyed every bit of it...
  3. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Thanks.. :eek:)
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  4. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    That was good....awesome...:beer:
  5. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Ok tell me long did it take you to write this poem?
    I mean all the words are carefully selected....and lines ate perfectly connected.

    Wonderful...and fantabulous.
  6. Morbid_Angel

    Morbid_Angel Sid the sloth

    perfect man ..reps !
  7. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress


    You know what that means ..
  8. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e &lt;3V/S&lt;3 50 CeNt$

    gud goin long time no poems ? sup ..... ;)
  9. himika9

    himika9 !!!WANNA B ROCKSTAR!!!

    yeah really very nice language....:nw:
  10. #iR@


    AWESOME!!! luved every line of it! keep rocking gurl! :rock:
  11. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    rain i suppose is ur favriout topic...nice poem
  12. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    hehe..donno... the last five lines were last minute
    i'd written this about a month ago..couldnt find an ending..
    Thanks :)

    :) thanks..jus havent posted any..

    @Notty- um..thanks....never keep me wondering if what u meant was good or bad.. :)

    @Garima-Thanks :)
    @Hira- Thanks girl... :)
    @Arnold_Aj..thanks man!
    @Manu- its jus that time of the year..and yh..i do like the rain;)
  13. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Smile of Disguise ..

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