Isostasy At Pace

This is my 3rd re-attempt at poetry. Here's the poem:

Integral forces engross through
one word, one power, one path
life spent through realistic magic
so much applied that was so; never…

Inner sophistication, glorified
Opens up to a limit, a want
Pilfering through alien matter
Grey matter isolates, scatters, retires…

Convulsing private thought patterns,
Stabilizing isostasy,
Morbid gluons, inversing altruism,
Reversing restrained, limiting takes its toll

Successes of want devours, core with emptiness
Keeping with reality, until “rules” betray
Once earned, now a gain; sweat drops in bucketloads,
Astounds on the other side, devaluation

Hope you liked/ got it :beer:

 

Where's cryptic ? The only person to put effort to read my poems :cry2:

 

^^i dint really get it.....but is it something about ppl who get success suddenly and are so carried away that their inner humanity dies and they become machines hungry for power?....if even i am remotely close in understanding ur poem, I would be glad...

 

You are quite close my friend..... :beer:
Hope you liked it...

 

yeeeeeee.....i am so happy....i am proud of myself...reps 4 you...

 

Thanks :grin:

 

also include a dictionary in that

lol

as i am sure some people wont understand all the terms(not me !!)


really nice one n seems u r getting betterwith poetry!!

keep on the good work!!

 

@spy game: Those are the words that come to my mind, so thats how it ends up being. Anyway, thanks

 

whats with the solos??? and the wierd instruments??
nice poem..!!!

 

here!!!! and just as confused as i always am when i read ur poems b4 u explainin em to me :grin:

see, other ppl read ur poems

and i tried goin by what hardik said... hmm... i kinda still need u to explain :

 

Nice that other people actually read it.... thanks to them :hugs and kisses followed by 3 minutes of silence:
@tax: Thanks man, appreciate it. I just put the solos for fun.

 

ok.. now that i know what it's abt... i like it!!

although i wish i could understand ur poems without help :

 

^^ That doesnt matter. I think its impossible to "understand" an of these poems because i dont think there's enough info. Anyway glad (i mean it!!) that you liked it...

 

the cowbell thng was kinda distracting though :annoyed:

and u know i have to concentrate a lot to understand ur poem!

 

Imagine mentally reatarded people talking to you.... You'll be thinking hard to figure out what theyre saying. But then a lot of time, they themselves distract you from understanding. More distractions added.

 

same here....i read atleast 10 times before i got it...and it wasnt even all correct : ..

and plz remove that "cowbell" and "tu ru" things...its very annoying....you write a serious poem and then add these...doesnt make sense.....

 

OK, will delete them I was just trying to be a madhuresh wannabe.

 

:RollLol: :RollLol: :RollLol:

 

haha.. but this isnt like that..... i smhow always feel like ur ahead of ur time or smthng :shock:

 

^^thats right ...i feel it too...check out his thread on self made wallpapers... in computer forum i guess it is....even his wallpapers make you think...:shock: