invisible touch

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by tumhare_divya, Nov 28, 2005.

  1. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    i am sure all of you have had a time where you feel someone's warmth or crave it...and the memory or very thought of them gets you all "curly" inside...

    ...here goes another short rhyme...

    "INVISIBLE TOUCH"

    Feeling your touch...I toss and i turn...

    For it is you that I love ...and your presence I yearn...

    I curl up in my sheets...in the cold of being alone...

    I dream you are by my side...and your name i softly moan...

    You are the air in my lungs...each beat of my heart...

    I feel your warmth near me ...though we live far apart...

    I'm dying to pour my love...and fulfill your every desire...

    As the day we meet keeps nearing...my passion rises higher...

    I see some element of you in all that i see...

    Feeling you're close is a comfort for me...

    Wherever you are...remember in all that you do...

    Someone across the ocean is thinking of you...
     
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  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    wooow....

    *sob*

    *sniff*

    *sob*
     
  3. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    That was so nice & sweet.....reps for u.
     
  4. shak

    shak Harrr!

    phew!! this is so classsy!! excellent divya ... i like the subtle erotic touch to that (i know i am talking taboo but meh) ... nice one .. let me see if i can rep you ..
     
  5. can_i_play

    can_i_play New Member

    Its so simple and nice
    Evryone feels this way ...
    Three cheers for you to pass these feelings on to paper............
     
  6. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    amazing .. loved it .. n hey .. of course there is a hidden feel to it .. :p: .. it's not juz a poem .. there's lot behind these wordz .. hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ..
    Reps 4 u .. got lot more to say .. but i guess i'l juz keep it inside me .. ;)

    nJOY!
     
  7. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    hey
    nice job yaar..did u write it recently because i don't remember reading it in your book......U should really consider to take writing poems seriously.........
    That poem is so cool that i could feel it all over me.............
     
  8. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    ^^^yeah...you are right...it wasnt in my book...i wrote it a few days ago actually...:)...sigh... its a feeling I always have... but i put it on paper just recently...:)
     
  9. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    I can feel the touch of those words... love u...
     
  10. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    ^^^hmmm Love in da air!!
     

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