Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by zoomingrocket, Apr 23, 2005.

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  1. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    My mind refuses to sleep...
    Dont know why!
    My body refuses to relax...
    Dont know why!

    A restlessness lies inside me...
    An anxiety i experience...
    An anxious heart...

    Intoxicated by your LOVE...
    My mind has been ADDICTED...

    I need to hold u tight...
    I need to hold u firm..,
    as SAND, u slip off;
    my hands..
    my heart...

    Few tears roll out of eyes...
    The warm saline not new to me...
    But my mind refuses to sleep!

    Grammatical Correction by d_ist_urb_ed
    Title Suggestion: Reem

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  2. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    :grin: wow...nice... deep deeeeeep... zooooom :grin:
    nxt time plz mention her name :grin:
  3. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    lovely poem zooooommm:)
    there is a feeling of the cycle going on n on..
    very truly intoxicating!!
  4. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    thats more like it.i like this kinda lyrics for sure!!!
    small but gud.......
  5. lord_neo

    lord_neo Guest

    man poems like this and yet you are single, simply amazing!! Then again the fact you are single encourages you to write them....quite a quandary. :p:
  6. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    coool man..........way too cool........ so ur a whiz at literature too not just ecomerce :)
  7. 6string_addict

    6string_addict * Addicted Guitarist * <img src="http://www.indian

    wow zoom nice poem..
    it seems that you had gripped the poem in a nice order....little but nice...
    sugg : how about the title ' Refuses ' . ?
  8. Bristy

    Bristy ...

    a lit one for u...tho dunno much about u ....
    just feel like writing it is...

    If i draw a picture I ll draw it with a twist
    I ll draw it with a razor blade and draw it in my wrist
    if i draw correctly a red fountain will appear
    wash away my sorro wash away my fear...
  9. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :&quot;(

    wow.. u r tooo good.... awesome....
    reps 4 u.. if it permits.

    EDIT: sprd sum reps :eek::
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