interviewing the GOD

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Feb 16, 2006.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member


    your comments are my treasure..go ahead with your criticism too

    standing infront of God inquired HOW HE created the world,
    he simply raised the eye brows and paid no attention
    watched my antics to attract him and kept mum
    directed with fingers to sit in corner in opposite direction,

    finished the pending game and welcomed me
    gave the green beep to go ahead and pose any question
    thanking HIM for the time and feeling lucky
    for the interview chance still covered by no one.

    shown to me the basic ingredients to create the life,
    emphasizing on the point of destiny and reason to smile.

    creating union for the happiness of soul,
    but defended the idea of heart break.
    with a cute smile on face
    stressed the need the importance to equate.

    created beauty to make the world a place to live
    and given the hope and dream to achieve
    lost temper on the state of world
    cursing human who forget humanity and left that to cry and die

    he branded the path where we have to walk
    but we HUMANS makes it curve and cross
    we soulful idiots loose the patience early
    as soon as HE throws the tough dice.

    evryone cannot be allowed to have silverspoon
    thats why he created the modest and honest.
    sprinkling the powder of logic and sentiments
    and human attitude burnt them for the race to be an elite.

    greed,hatred were not picked up at all.
    recipe was perfectly blended and left for the stipulated time being.
    anger were never the seasoning,
    leak happned and jealousy formed while experimenting

    god answered my all questions and left someone
    mind was blank with so many questions and messy confusion,
    noted down all his answers up to the fact and truth.
    as human did not satisfied me and unable to soothe.

  2. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Nicely captured, but am not a taker for these thoughts.
    Am agnostic,
    mebbe to te point of being atheist.

    Good writing.
  3. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    good stuff...reminds me Neo's encounter with Matrix creator...
  4. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    very nice work man

    "mind was blank with so many questions "
    blank yet full..hmmmm :)
  5. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    really good piece of work,liked it very much....:beer:
  6. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    nice thought.... rohit... well expressed....
  7. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    nice poem
    very well written
    but i don't quite agree wid that

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