tanhayee mein mujhe aise yaad aaye tum yun laga zindagi se milke aa gaye hum tumhara saath jo mila mujhe virane mein bhari mahfil mein ab tanha se ho gaye hum dur ho tum dur hai manzilen meri saath jo hota tera paa lete manzil bhi hum mujhe tumse koi shikaayat to nahi par shikaayat na kare to fir kya karein hum badle zamana chahe badle khuda hi jo tum badal gaye to fir kahan jayenge hum bewajah ruthna fir maan jana bina tere tumse hi baatein karna ise deewanapan nahi to fir kya kahenge hum aa jaao ki main akela na rahoon aa jaao ki saanse meri chalti rahe na mil paye tumse to mar jayenge hum
ye corrections hain tanhayee mein mujhe aise yaad aaye tum yun laga zindagi se milke "aa gaye hum" make it "mil ke aaye hum" tumhara saath jo mila mujhe virane mein "bhari mahfil mein ab tanha se ho gaye hum".. "khade mehfil main, andar phir bhi tan haiye sajaye hum" "mujhe tumse koi shikaayat to nahi par shikaayat na kare to fir kya karein hum" "tumse koii shikayat nahi haale dil hi aisa hai bayyan kartain hian to lagta hai sikva karne aaye hum" abee sabhi lines main kuch kuch gadbad hai re-write or edit make good phrases .... matla muktak radif kafiyaa tukbandi kisi ka to khyaal rahoo meri jaan BUT khayal mast hian full points for that...
