innocent?????????

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by $cReWdR!veR, Sep 13, 2005.

  1. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    k people from mornin iv been pretty mind ****ed....so this **** is comin up....






    Your false persona
    Makes others think
    That you are someone
    Who you re really not.

    You pull free and argue
    Bite the bullet and then
    Spit it back in their faces
    They re obliged to believe you.

    You re an idiot who
    Doesn t live in the real world
    You think that the Earth
    It revolves around you.

    You used to cry to me,
    Real crying, when you couldn t
    Get your own way, believe me
    Those tears will work no more.

    You think I m heartless?
    Oh sure, but you cannot feel
    The feelings that I feel, the feelings
    That you caused me to conceal.

    Because in everyone else s eyes
    You re innocent, but they re fooled,
    They only hear your side, don t bother
    Listening to mine. I am the scum .

    I don t have enemies, most people
    Know to stay on the right side
    When someone falls out big-time
    That s it, they re gone, they die.

    I know how to mess a life up
    But don t cause me to try
    You pushed me too far, I won t take it
    Your time is up, now say goodbye
     
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  2. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    good bye :D

    nice work here... reps... liked it really
     
  3. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Very well written...Screwdriver!

    The flow is adorable...do keep writing like this!

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  4. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    @rizaag.....thanx for appreciatin.....
    @amanush.....thanks....like your signature man.....
     
  5. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    awesome again.....try making a song outta it...
     
  6. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    ...............
     
  7. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    OK ... screwdriver, i can see something or rather someone has really screwed up ...

    anyway the poem was nice ...
     
  8. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    nice one screwdriver....but who is the inspiration behind this ??
     
  9. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    .......one bloody fu.ckin bas.tard who i once took as a friend.....more than a friend i guess.....
     
  10. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Hey Screwdriver....
    thats a nice poem..... the poet had written it in similar circumstances mayb
    guess i'v read that somewher on another site probably

    post some other poems aswell

    take care..
     
  11. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned


    http://poets.unknowncommunity.com/db/poems/18717?pl=user
     
  12. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    ^^wow dude!!! :nw:
     
  13. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

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  14. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    @screwdriver..
    uve got some explaining to do dear... :p:
     
  15. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    plz credit da real poet b4 posting poems
     
  16. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    screwdriver if that is realy u in the picture - I LOVE U ...

    yeah am very shallow ... i go by the looks :grin:
     
  17. ronnieanand

    ronnieanand n00bier th@n th0u

    That was bad to steal to poem screwdriver.

    Anyway somebody seems to have totally messed up your life. All your poetries have a sad heroine. Any happy endings ?
     
  18. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    anyway....all thanx to bubblymartini....she prompted she has read one poem b4 so i was tempted to do a google on few of the lines :grin:
     
  19. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    hehe.....im caught....
     
  20. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    are y bhaiyon aur beheno........screw driver is anyway sadistic person.,..so what else can u xpect from a sadistic person that stealing other's work and earning reps!....good thing i din donate pts or give reps!:grin:
     

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