Inferiority.......????

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Hardik, Nov 9, 2005.

  1. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    hi ppl......i dont wanna say anything...just read and tell me how it is....:)


    Inferiority

    It all comes to me finally
    All blame on myself
    Does it have to be this way;
    Will I wail Eternally?

    Of everything I am aware
    Thoughts chased by no deception
    Have the zenith in my sight
    But why dont I care?

    Knowledge is an illusion
    Advice makes no change
    Ignorance blinds me everytime
    What is this delusion?

    The success does not hurt
    Faliure is a motivation
    The strategy is laid;
    Then why does my mind flirt?

    A day passes in a trance
    Then the past haunts me
    Tears me to the soul
    Do I have a chance?

    Preplexed by this complexity
    Mystified by my own actions
    A question torments the soul
    Is this Inferiority?


    EDIT: Its my own work....... :p:
     
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  2. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    if this is urs,its execellent..if its not urs,then also its excellent.....
     
  3. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    not bad...... good job...:)
     
  4. har1s

    har1s <b>Untitled</b>

    veryy go0od
     
  5. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.


    of course ist mine... :cool: ...thanks

    @iR & har....thank you.... :cool:
     
  6. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    @ hardik.... welx man! :D and yea one more thing..... rite #iR@ cause iR is the short form of INFRARED RADIATION........ hehehe :eek::
     
  7. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    ^^ha ha...ok but doesnt #iR@ mean "number of infrared radiation at the same rate"...:p:...(thats an engineer's mind)....:)
     
  8. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    :RollLol: not bad....... i could use that sometime..... waisay it's just my name.... lol as in HIRA.... not infrared radiation! :p:
     
  9. har1s

    har1s <b>Untitled</b>

    ^^...lol...it sure does..
     
  10. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    r u making fun of my id???? :annoyed: kidding yaar.... just messing around! :p:

    i wonder wat's so different about #iR@... everyones keep commenting on it!
     
  11. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.


    so its Hira...ok ok...never saw it that way...:)
     
  12. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    lol... well that how an ARTISTS mind see's #iR@ ! lol....
     
  13. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    I really liked the rhyme scheme.
     
  14. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    ^^thank you bjr...yes.,had to work on that,i dont rite often ,have made an attempt after a long long time.....:)
     
  15. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    engineers r good poets also.....hehe......
     
  16. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^^cant u talk abt anythng but engineering?? :annoyed:

    @hardik

    nice poem!!
    man, i need to start writing poems abt different thngs.. :eek::
     
  17. pranabgohain

    pranabgohain New Member

    Re:

    Good enuff
     
  18. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    nice work....
     
  19. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    One Of The Best Poems Here!!
     
  20. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    wow....thanks ppl....i am flattered...:):)

    @angel...what do you mean by different things?..all of ur poems arent da same are they?...:confused:.....:)

    @spy.. :shock: :shock:eek:ne of da best poems!!wow...thanks :beer:
     

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