just wrote something........couldnt complete it ....... will work over it thought i could get some feedback over it for correction or improvements Sultanat-e-haywaaniyat ki pairavee main khauf-e-khudawandi bhula baithey unchey azaim unchey khayalat talay eeman dafna baithey waqt ki daur main jeet ki hawas ko maqsood-e-zindagi jaan kar maut-e-barhaq ki us haar ko ranjish samajh bhula baithey laut kar ultay paaon chaley yun apney kal ki taraf nazariya-e-mustaqbil liye zamana-e-haal gawa baithey beenaai paa kar na beena ban kar ankhain mond leney waley khud ko daana jaan kar na daan apni qabr jala baithey aya jo yaum-e-hashr huee phir aamaal ki poooch-gachh to sochain hua kya hasil jis par sarmaya-e-zindagi luta baithey what do you think? EDIT: I used a word in this poem inappropriately.....i wonder if u could figure out........ but does anyone know the literal meaning of 'Myth' in urdu?
Amazing job, Khurram....! ur application of Urdu terminology is sophisticated, yet profound..... Prouda ya! Keep writing!!!!... (and hope u keep up with those creative moods Carez, S
thunkoo shailja for those precious comments :grin: nimisha....glad to know that u read it more than once.....:grin: n i hope u got all the points i was makin the in verses........thanx alot for ur response.... im still lookin for the word 'myth' in urdu :
^^ i think :think: U R FABULOUS :rock: ... what gr8 urdu, man ... y haven't u named it ??? ... 2 good man ... 2 good ... i 2 had it read it multiple no. of times 2 get it ... but still didn't get 1 line - "khud ko daana jaan kar na daan apni qabr jala baithey"
^ kekekekekeke :grin: yorker try karoon? :grin: thanx rohan.........well i couldnt come up with any name.........n i think u couldnt understand the words 'daanaa' and 'na daan' ....... 'na daan' means a fool..........'daanaa' is jus the opposite
errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...... ummmmmmmmmmm... NOW I KNOW WAT I AM GONNA GET IN MA O LEVELS URDU FINAL! *runs outta the room* seriously i didn;t get it! :shock: MUST BE NICE WORK! :
^^?? alfaz ka intekhaab sahi hai.......khayal sahi nahi? ya khayal sahi hai.......alfaz ka intekhaab sahi nahi?
aapne title aisa diya aur hum kuch aur samajh baithe um...post the urdu glossary.. its kinda hard to understand those who know zilch about urdu.. and btw whats the title ?
