In Memory

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by horsesmouth, May 15, 2010.

  1. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Okie, m talking bout long lost days, mebbe 20 yrs ago.. lets agree on the fact tht alluvus had childhood crushes, me including, and this is dedicated to 'em sweet days!

    Its been long since our paths seperated,
    the days passed by in an endless tirade.
    Countless thoughts came and went by,
    and yet your memory refuses to fade.

    And a string of stolen glances,
    the walks home, and the missed chances;
    In our togetherness, the world lay still,
    dancing in the smothering rain.

    Your eyes still shine like the moonlight,
    reflecting the times together we spent.
    And in the way my path is broken,
    where your thoughts hung in emptiness.

    And yet your memory refuses to fade,
    even though time does'nt seem to wait.
    And our lives have moved on far,
    Still its you i would never forget.
  2. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    I can associate myself completely with this piece. well knit together.

    great job
  3. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    m not lying...but after reading this my eyes turned moist
    i've got nothing more to say...u r GREAT!!!!!
  4. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    wow!!! dis is just "awesm"!!!! has d power to turn even d eyes of hitler numb...i guess...
  5. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    @walk_alone... yes yes....schoolboy crush :D ........ ;)
    @sukriti... sweet......thanks..
    @nandy... thanks-a-lot gal, though m still doubtful 'bout hitler.... :)
  6. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    hey horsie, u're truly amazing man, i've been reading ur stuf so long, and neva get tired rereading them,
    this too is a gr8 piece of work!
  7. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    needs spread reps...
  8. metalhead_junky

    metalhead_junky New Member

    its grrrrreat dude...u're amazing!
  9. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    @allstarsband n metalhead
    hey thnks.....both of u!

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