I'm too Big to cry( Orginal Composition)...plz plz plz post feedbacks....

Discussion in 'IGT Soundtrack - Your Band, Your Gig, Your Music' started by varunrajani, Jan 13, 2007.

  1. varunrajani

    varunrajani New Member

    THis is my first try at composing a song...
    plz hear it and let me know ur honest opinions....
    guys and gals one more request....
    DO READ THE LYRICS WHILE LISTENING THE SONG:: "PLZ"

    ""
    I never stopped to realize
    How lonely I would be
    I never thought the day would come
    When you'd grow tired of me

    Your voice was never sweeter
    Than the day you said goodbye
    You'll never know how much it hurt
    Because I'm too big to cry

    If I knew then what I know now
    You'd still be kissing me
    Instead there's someone else's lips
    Where mine used to be

    I say hello and wish you well
    Each time I pass you by
    But you'll never know how much it hurt
    Because I'm too big to cry

    You never looked so wonderful
    As the day you walked away
    I used to say, "I love you"
    But that I could not say

    I can't forget you darlin'
    No matter how much I try
    You'll never know how much it hurt
    Because I'm too big to cry"""

    they are frm my favroutie poem....


    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pageartist.cfm?bandID=616074

    waiting for the feedbacks ...
     
  2. varunrajani

    varunrajani New Member

    hey ppl...not respondin...???

    i was enthu abt my post here...but i guess ppl are not replying....plz guys hear it....
     
  3. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    dude stop crying u r too big to cry lol

    will give that song a try... my net speed is too slow recently... so u will have to wait.... lol
     
  4. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    nice attempt...rather too good if its ur first try at composing. keep improving..reps
     
  5. arparwan

    arparwan New Member

    man i liked the lyrics...... nice attempt man.... even ur singing is good.......at some places u just messed up but its ok.......u have put nice effort......
     

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