I'm too Big to cry( Orginal Composition)...plz plz plz post feedbacks....

THis is my first try at composing a song...
plz hear it and let me know ur honest opinions....
guys and gals one more request....
DO READ THE LYRICS WHILE LISTENING THE SONG:: "PLZ"

""
I never stopped to realize
How lonely I would be
I never thought the day would come
When you'd grow tired of me

Your voice was never sweeter
Than the day you said goodbye
You'll never know how much it hurt
Because I'm too big to cry

If I knew then what I know now
You'd still be kissing me
Instead there's someone else's lips
Where mine used to be

I say hello and wish you well
Each time I pass you by
But you'll never know how much it hurt
Because I'm too big to cry

You never looked so wonderful
As the day you walked away
I used to say, "I love you"
But that I could not say

I can't forget you darlin'
No matter how much I try
You'll never know how much it hurt
Because I'm too big to cry"""

they are frm my favroutie poem....


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waiting for the feedbacks ...

 

hey ppl...not respondin...???

i was enthu abt my post here...but i guess ppl are not replying....plz guys hear it....

 

dude stop crying u r too big to cry lol

will give that song a try... my net speed is too slow recently... so u will have to wait.... lol

 

nice attempt...rather too good if its ur first try at composing. keep improving..reps

 

man i liked the lyrics...... nice attempt man.... even ur singing is good.......at some places u just messed up but its ok.......u have put nice effort......