Hey, I wrote this poem today... if u wanna give feedback on it, let it be abt d poem (n not abt how i'm feelin n who i'm waiting for n all...) I'll Be Waiting A little crazy I may be But I'm different from what you see A little butterfly is what you lack You're looking for it but just turn back It's in my hands and it wants to fly It'll set you free and you'll never have to cry Alll you have to do is come to me I'll be waiting with my heart on my sleeve A little kiddish I may be But I'm more grown up that I may seem Don't dismiss me as a ray of sunshine There's a whole lotta darkness in my mind You're not doing me a favour by going away There is just so much left to say All you have to do is come to me I'll be waiting with my heart on my sleeve A little disturbed you may be But trust me, it doesn't bother me With yourself you're fighting this war Did you ever ask yourself "What for?" A little solace I had brought I need you too, you're all that I've got All you have to do is come to me I'll be waiting with my heart on my sleeve
@ansh, martina, vini thnx.. @vini remember i told u i'm off writing poems for a while... i wrote this soon after :grin: i always end up doin wat i dont plan to.. hehe
and thats the beauty.. u can never write a poem if u plan and then settle down to write it..never wid me atleast!!!
ofcourse i know ... even these ---> :annoyed: n were intentional or rather to put it more bluntly : they were manipulative actions :grin: : just like your intentional onces