hi again...... so another one from me lol this time its even worse........well the idea is to show comparison between a man and a monkey.........n to show that a monkey is more clever than a man....... i've written two verses.......i want you guys to give ur input as well .......... ik banda aur ik bandar niklay for a trip to samandar bandar ne charhai chaddi aur banda dhoti k andar dono phir nahaney baithey jakey lehron main laitey bandar ne lagaya gota banday ne pakar liya lota (lagaya gota = to dive) what u think? yah i know again weird stuff : but well i think its a sound idea for the poem i mentioned :
:shock: you have trouble sleeping at nite dont you? actually after a second read, its ridiculously funny...
Dude lolz!! Herez my contribution. Dont make a separate stanza: Kabhi to apni pithi dhota Aur kabhi beth ke khali rota Wahan se guzra aik tota Kehne laga, Tu kaahe ko rota? Banda bola ik soz se Jo bhi sunta, wohi rota Kash mujh mein aur is bandar mein, Kuch to faraq hota! Tota bola rota kyun hai Aqal ko apni khota kyun hai Mein bhi to ik tota hoon, Kehne ko mein chota hoon, Lekin phir bhi kehta hoon Dekhta hoon jab tera moon, Wo nahi hai tujh se pyara Tu hai maa ka raaj dulaara Asal mein baat hai itni yaara Tujh ko chahiye aik sahaara Hota nahi hai tera guzaara Sarkon pe phirta tu awaara Dhoondta hai ik toota taara Jo ho is duniya se pyara Yahan pe gande paani mein Tujhko nahi wo milne waala Uth phir himmat kar ke yaara Jhaampar maar usey aik karaara Aur phir se chal tu maara maara Lagaata hua yehi naara MEIN HOON MAA KA RAAJ DULAARA MUJH KO CHAHIYA AIK SAHAARA CHAAND KE TUKRE BAHIR NIKAL PEHEN KE APNA LAAL GHARAARA Lolz dude i gotta go now. Im sorry i changed the direction of ur poem, but this stuff kinda came to me spontaneously. U own the rights to final stuff. Cut off wht u want to. I wont feel bad. P.S.: I borrowed a couple o lines form Allama Iqbal. Sorry Allama ji!!!
