' If Really You Have To Hate Me...! '

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Amanush..., Feb 2, 2006.

  1. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    If really you have to hate me
    Hate me now...
    now that the world is intent
    to oppose whatever I do,
    unite yourself to the hostility
    of my destiny…

    If you have to reject me
    Reject me now…
    Don't be the last blow
    that will arrive all of a sudden
    when my heart
    will have already overcome
    this unbearable sadness…

    If you want to leave me
    Leave me now…
    don't wait for the last moment
    when other scanty pains
    will have done their damage,
    but come for first
    that I may feel from the beginning
    the worse swash of my destiny...


    Amanush...

    :)
     
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  2. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    dude!!! :annoyed:

    I am all bowled over..If I had been a girl to tujh par zaroor fida ho jata. :nw:

    its simply superb ....Tell me u copied :think:
    Otherwise i will start self sympathasizing :mad:

    :beer: keep it up..let it flow more

    :cool: will be waiting...
     
  3. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    nice poem... and the thoughts that u expressed through it, well, they're pretty interesting and i can see what u mean, well done :)
     
  4. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    wow! very nice thoughts and very well expressed!:)
     
  5. taxyse

    taxyse t3h.

    mast yaar!!!! i loved it....that says it alll...
     
  6. Aka Oz

    Aka Oz /\K/\ - Ozy

    hmmmm kool stuff
     
  7. mr singh

    mr singh New Member

    u hav lived up 2 the title of a truly gifted poet, congrats, nice poem... keep it up.
     
  8. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    too good.. as always..
     
  9. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Its been beautifully written....You are actually good at writing...
    Cant rep u ... as i have to spread some..keep up the good work :beer:
     
  10. Nanda

    Nanda Bassist

    Nah ... Somehow i didnt like it ...
     
  11. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Agle janam main hamara intazaar kar lena
    khud hi ladki bankar aap se milne aayeinge...:p:

    Thanks for appreciating and keep coming

    Take care

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  12. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks for appreciating this one too...Angel !

    Take care...ok ?

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  13. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks for your valueable comments...#iR@ !

    Keep encouraging and do take care of yourself

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  14. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Isse pasand karne ke liye bahout dhanyavaad...Yaar !

    Younhi aate rehna aur apna khayaal rakhna

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  15. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks for the kool reply...Ozy !

    Take care

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  16. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Mr Singh...! I think that much water must still flow beneath the bridge before
    deserving such an awesome title... :eek::

    Thanks for appreciating

    Take care

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  17. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Bahout Shukriya...Madam !

    Apna khayaal rakhiyega aur younhi aate hi rehna

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  18. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    awww cut it out :)

    kuch soch samajh kar hi yeh title diya tha ;)
     
  19. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Your comments on the poem are more worthful than the reps...Knight ki gf !;)

    Do keep encouraging and take care

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  20. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    :nw: :nw: :nw:

    Amanush...

    :)
     

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