' If Really You Have To Hate Me...! '

If really you have to hate me
Hate me now...
now that the world is intent
to oppose whatever I do,
unite yourself to the hostility
of my destiny…

If you have to reject me
Reject me now…
Don't be the last blow
that will arrive all of a sudden
when my heart
will have already overcome
this unbearable sadness…

If you want to leave me
Leave me now…
don't wait for the last moment
when other scanty pains
will have done their damage,
but come for first
that I may feel from the beginning
the worse swash of my destiny...

Amanush...

 

dude!!! :annoyed:

I am all bowled over..If I had been a girl to tujh par zaroor fida ho jata. :nw:

its simply superb ....Tell me u copied :think:
Otherwise i will start self sympathasizing

:beer: keep it up..let it flow more

will be waiting...

 

nice poem... and the thoughts that u expressed through it, well, they're pretty interesting and i can see what u mean, well done

 

wow! very nice thoughts and very well expressed!

 

hmmmm kool stuff

 

u hav lived up 2 the title of a truly gifted poet, congrats, nice poem... keep it up.

 

too good.. as always..

 

Its been beautifully written....You are actually good at writing...
Cant rep u ... as i have to spread some..keep up the good work :beer:

 

Nah ... Somehow i didnt like it ...

 

Agle janam main hamara intazaar kar lena
khud hi ladki bankar aap se milne aayeinge...:

Thanks for appreciating and keep coming

Take care

Amanush...

 

Thanks for appreciating this one too...Angel !

Take care...ok ?

Amanush...

 

Thanks for your valueable comments...#iR@ !

Keep encouraging and do take care of yourself

Amanush...

 

Isse pasand karne ke liye bahout dhanyavaad...Yaar !

Younhi aate rehna aur apna khayaal rakhna

Amanush...

 

Thanks for the kool reply...Ozy !

Take care

Amanush...

 

Mr Singh...! I think that much water must still flow beneath the bridge before
deserving such an awesome title... :

Thanks for appreciating

Take care

Amanush...

 

Bahout Shukriya...Madam !

Apna khayaal rakhiyega aur younhi aate hi rehna

Amanush...

 

awww cut it out

kuch soch samajh kar hi yeh title diya tha

 

Your comments on the poem are more worthful than the reps...Knight ki gf !

Do keep encouraging and take care

Amanush...

 

:nw: :nw: :nw:

Amanush...

 

Jhoota Kahin Ka...! :

Amanush...