Dedicated to someone I loved...still love(I think) : If I die today I would die believing that you never loved me If I die today I would die knowing that you never cared for me If I die today I would die thinking that you never wanted me If I die today I would die with a hope….that next time you’ll be mine If I die today I would die believing that u thought my love is a joke If I die today I would die knowing that you never took me seriously If I die today I would die thinking that you always laughed at my feelings If I die today I would die with a hope that if not my life.. my death would prove my love And now when I am dying I’m seeing you coming towards me With a bunch of flowers & a few words of sympathy And even now I don’t know how to tell you That I Love You more than what you think I do…..
*sigh* yet another sad poem.....make sure that u guys leave a word or two here aftr reading it, so that I may know if it was worth writing/reading
u know i dun like pessimism .. but hey .. after so long i got to read one of your poems ... i think its ... like you have taken all your dark feelings .. put them into words .. arranged them and chucked em out! .. really nicely done .. but dun lemme see you this down again! kiddin .. loved it ..thnkx for sharing ...
but y write a poem for sum1..rather die for sum1 who cares a dime about everything..heh..just using my right of expression : but nice poem..u've written!! i think u've inhabited in too much of darkness..come unto the daylight my dear!!! ... i dunno y everyone writes poem on dark themes (including me also) y not write a poem which reflects some positivity and happiness... u take the lead :grin:
the writing was very good...........u said it ..........whatever u wanted to .......came out strong and beautiful ........ felt like the one writng ths poem has been betrayed or let down by a loved one....... probably just boken up.......... well those are just guesses wouldnt hepl u if the could......... nice work .......reps
@vini....whenevr i wud write the nxt poem i wud keep ur words in mind @ak....thanx so much.... well...i think being a gemini i hv this problm(if i may call it a problm) that whenevr m with sm1 m the most optimist person on earth....these r sm feelings which i never shared with any1...a second face of a gemi u can say...& since the day i hv found IGT i hv found a way to express my sad/dark feelings too....i kno they r sad...but evn that needs to b expressed...its bad to hide ur feelings....just let them flow(gud/bad or sad) is wot i believe....
u will always be welcome to share whatever you want here at IGT i am sure .. OR there is always PM'ing
AAWWWWWWWWWWWW....... such a SWEET POEM! i repeat U RITE REALLLLLLYYYYY WELL!!!!!!!!! reps for u! :beer:
u r poem is very close to ur heart.. i can say straight from the heart.. but why shud u die ?? :shock: whoever he is.. if he doesn't understand wat u feel for him.. doesn't understand ur true for him... ur feelings for him.. ur sentiments .. ur emotions.. then u deserve a much better guy then him.. life is very beautiful... garru.. just close ur eyes and open it with a wide smile...u will find many good frnds.. who will be there with u.. just to keep u smiling like that...
