Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by CrYpTiC_angel, Sep 27, 2005.

  1. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Here's a poem I jst wrote... it's very kiddish.
    Nonetheless, here it is:


    I bring you to reality
    When you feel fake
    I'm the icing
    On your rotten cake
    I'm the one who makes you laugh
    When you're sick of every damn thing
    And when you can't get to sleep
    For you, I sing
    I'm your angel
    When life seems like hell
    And when I couldn't lift you up
    With you, I fell
    You never even had to
    Tell me what's wrong
    I'd always know
    I'd always be around
    You're nothing without me
    You'll see
    Sooner or later
    You'll come back to me
    But I won't wait forever
    That's all I can say
    So don't be too disappointed
    If I just walk away...

    Sorry you had to read that.. :p:
  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Once again, I apologize for unleashing this horror of a poem on you all... :p:
  3. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    is dis abt love or something to feel about when one is lonly!?!
  4. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    hey cryptic

    amazing is the word.....very nice and emphatic poem
    need to spread more reps...so 2k points for u :)

    ps-im so inspired to write a poem too..i came to a fullstop after posting 3 poems :think: anyways..wotever :p:
  5. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @angel...it ws wonderfully wonderfull :grin:
    not kiddish at all.....gr88 job done
  6. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    it's abt bein taken 4 granted :mad: and how i wont wait 4ever for sm1 to finally come arnd


    can't believe I could inspire sm1 2 write! but if i did... then gr8! :) thnx!


    thnx again!!
  7. diva

    diva Banned

    nice poem cryptic_angel, but I feel some of your earlier poems are far better than this one. anyway i wish i could write half as good as that.
  8. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    I love you cryptic angel ...
    u know i wanted to say something just like this ...
  9. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Apology accepted.:p:

    Seriously though, I thought it was nice, but it seemed a bit of a rant. You know, what you wrote maybe entirely true, but I don't think someone who'd so so much good, would go boasting about it. I dont know if I made sense...but well, thats what I thought.
  10. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    i know wat u mean but it's like this... i've always written abt having been hurt or how sm1 is sooo amazing n 4 once, i wanted 2 write abt me being d gud 1! i didnt know wat as goin on b4.. but once i got 2 know, i realized i hate being taken for granted n i deserve better!

    And maybe, it's finally time to move on.....


    lol... thnx

    yeah.. i know this is not as gud... dat's y i apologized right after d poem!!
    anyways, thnx :)
  11. Gravity_defies

    Gravity_defies New Member

    hey u dont need to apologise to anyone....the poem is nice nyways....
  12. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    ok.. now my turn to react.. first of all i liked the title "I" shortest ever.. and the words used.. its good to see that IGT has so many poets..

    hey neo why don't we have a monthly magazine published by IGT.. where we can publish these good stuffs.. good work.. i can't give reps.. coz red reps are not to be shared.. :)
  13. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    We don't have an IGT magazine because the content will not be good-enough to sell....nor are we celebrities that even the slightest step we take will reach the headlines.
  14. lord_neo

    lord_neo Guest

    Nice poem Cryptic! Reps for you.

    Vishaw@ Do you mean a newsletter?
  15. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    ^^^ ya may b newsletter.. just thought of it..
  16. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    thanx every1.. :)
  17. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Wonderful poem girl..

    dunno after what you wrote this but probably some bad experience...
    its good that you'v finally decided to move on and let go....
    and its put forth very well!!

    All the best! ;)
    tk care

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