Here's a poem I jst wrote... it's very kiddish. Nonetheless, here it is: I I bring you to reality When you feel fake I'm the icing On your rotten cake I'm the one who makes you laugh When you're sick of every damn thing And when you can't get to sleep For you, I sing I'm your angel When life seems like hell And when I couldn't lift you up With you, I fell You never even had to Tell me what's wrong I'd always know I'd always be around You're nothing without me You'll see Sooner or later You'll come back to me But I won't wait forever That's all I can say So don't be too disappointed If I just walk away... Sorry you had to read that.. :
hey cryptic amazing is the word.....very nice and emphatic poem need to spread more reps...so 2k points for u ps-im so inspired to write a poem too..i came to a fullstop after posting 3 poems :think: anyways..wotever :
@rockin_devil it's abt bein taken 4 granted and how i wont wait 4ever for sm1 to finally come arnd @vini can't believe I could inspire sm1 2 write! but if i did... then gr8! thnx! @garima thnx again!!
nice poem cryptic_angel, but I feel some of your earlier poems are far better than this one. anyway i wish i could write half as good as that.
Apology accepted.: Seriously though, I thought it was nice, but it seemed a bit of a rant. You know, what you wrote maybe entirely true, but I don't think someone who'd so so much good, would go boasting about it. I dont know if I made sense...but well, thats what I thought.
@tejas i know wat u mean but it's like this... i've always written abt having been hurt or how sm1 is sooo amazing n 4 once, i wanted 2 write abt me being d gud 1! i didnt know wat as goin on b4.. but once i got 2 know, i realized i hate being taken for granted n i deserve better! And maybe, it's finally time to move on..... @jekyll lol... thnx @diva yeah.. i know this is not as gud... dat's y i apologized right after d poem!! anyways, thnx
ok.. now my turn to react.. first of all i liked the title "I" shortest ever.. and the words used.. its good to see that IGT has so many poets.. hey neo why don't we have a monthly magazine published by IGT.. where we can publish these good stuffs.. good work.. i can't give reps.. coz red reps are not to be shared..
We don't have an IGT magazine because the content will not be good-enough to sell....nor are we celebrities that even the slightest step we take will reach the headlines.
Wonderful poem girl.. dunno after what you wrote this but probably some bad experience... its good that you'v finally decided to move on and let go.... and its put forth very well!! All the best! tk care
