Wish I could hate you Wish I could wish you to be dead Wish I could breathe fire Wish I could scream out in hatred Wish I could be okay, With never seeing you again From longing to hear your voice, Wish I could refrain Wish you weren't an angel Wish you betrayed me Wish I couldn't understand you Wish I could be free Wish I felt I deserved better Wish I didn't get inspired by you Wish I felt you were frozen Wish there was something I could do Wish I could loathe you Wish life was fare Wish you weren't perfect Wish you were a nightmare Wish you tore me Wish you were my foe Coz it's so fuc.kin' hard To just let you go
hehhe ,,, nice one ... seems like u kinda frust with someone ... anyway ... the signature too is good ..
:..Yeah, I think the poem is out of the burning fire in your heart...!! I too love your siggy..!! nIK!
well, dats d prob, i'm frustrated but not with d guy who d poem is abt. wish i were coz it wud b so much easier then.. atleast i'd b able 2 hurl a few abusive words at him n move on... i jst edited my signature 2 show dat it's my own! glad u noticed..
..Oh' this quality of your's make you write such wonderful stuffs. Hatread and frustration are two important factors for poets..: I wish i cud rep you for thiz. But, not before I have spread some reputations.
:..Awww..!! Thnx..Anyway, don't you have your exams from monday?....Don't be awake till late..Go sleep well..:
:..Alright, it could be understood that you're smart enough to learn things in one day's time.. Good!! :beer:
I didn't like it. It's too much of a rant and gets too repititive after a while. It lacks content. What your poem said, I'd like you to fit into one single verse and then expand it further.
Well.. i was venting out wat i felt at d time, not really tryin 4 beautiful poetry or anythng. anyways, i appreciate ur frank opinion, thnx
:RollLol: attaboy ... i guess u should not write poems to please anyone ... so whatever cam out was good ... anyway as they say
I know that. You have to understand that no one ever "tries" to write beautiful poetry...those who try always fail. Poetry is an expression...the difference between you and some good writer is that the emotion you have captured in your poem is raw. It is this raw emotion that better writers can convert into beauty. That is "beautiful" poetry. It is always a vent to feelings...only some people can capture their emotions in a better way.
hey angel now i understand well as to what u meant earlier(pm) and i agree to ur emotions. And bjr there is no difference between she and the so called some of the good writers, they r both expressing their own feelings with their own atitudes!!!:beer:
