I was LATE...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by zoomingrocket, Jan 16, 2006.

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  1. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    I was lost somewhere...
    I woke up among gods...
    I was dead...

    I pleaded, i need to go back...
    But, i was LATE...

    Your touch,
    Our Memories,
    Those Moments....
    All bleeding like blood...

    I was helpless...
    But all I could do is watch you from above...

    I was LATE...

    Another one...

  2. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Man .. ur poems .. ur signature .. "expectations lead to disappointment" n dat shayari .. UR "HISTORY" SEEMS REALLY INTERESTING :grin: :grin:
  3. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    reminded me of movie GHOST....
    so less words.. so much of pain..
  4. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ^^ ghost is an awesome movie....and nice poem zoomy...
  5. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:
  6. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    ^^why r u always in a state of shock ????

    Nice poem zoom....... :beer:
  7. #iR@


    WOW... that was freaky! hehe.,... GOOD WORK MAN! :) i like the way u have described almost the entire scene with the help of a very few words! GRAET JOB!
  8. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    same feeling from me too...keep writing zoom :rock:
  9. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e <3V/S<3 50 CeNt$

    nice 1 m8 ......very lil poem but very nice
  10. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Another good one...
    good to see that u r posting ur creations regularly here now...since I joined IGT.....its pleasure reading them:)
  11. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    This a beautiful poem i came across... by an unknown poet.
    I didnt knew where to post it.. so i thought i would post it here....

    ~~Home Movies in My Mind ~~

    Images rushing
    faster nearer
    bodies touching
    focus clearer

    a puddle
    a memory
    it's amazing
    just how childish we could be

    late night walks
    walks on the beach
    this vision so close
    yet out of reach

    of laughter
    so real so free
    who could've made you smile
    was it really me

    bike rides
    anytime anyplace
    another release
    from the rat race

    with a impish grim
    a mischievous glance
    my god I remember
    now that was romance

    as I awake from my daydream
    once again I find
    I've been reviewing
    home movies in my mind
  12. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    knight_ ur collection is good
  13. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Zoom... I guess.... all of us have had our moment of feeling "I was LATE !!"
    Dont you think so??
  14. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    Dude, its never too late
    .......and like they say....better late than never......and better late than"the late"
    jokes apart...
    i still aint too late
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