hello everyone..... and i am bak wid another poem after a long time i guess... just rote this one last nite...... all i need u ppl to do is read this and post and honest opinion..... that's all i want! not that hard is it....... :think: hehe here goes....... I WANNA GO! Could u let me go Could u let me live on my own Don’t hold me back I wanna go I canb’t take this anymore U r taking over my mind I have no hold on myself I wanna break free My feelings stream down my heart Somewhere deep down inside Where they will live forever Let me break free It’s not easy being me I tremble… I struggle… I fight… but still I loose Let me go this time I don’t wanna loose Don’t hold me back Lissen… I WANNA GO! don't forget to comment and THANKS FOR READING!
love the emotional factor of this poem, but have seen better frm u in terms of writing style. still, i like it! even i havent written anythng for a while... :think: it worries me P.S. hon it should be lose not loose
interesting. thoroughly interesting. i have made a song using this peom... hope you dont mind. hehe.. dont worry. if i sing this song ever anywhere... i will quote the lyrics to be by u. i am new here... stumbled upon your poem by chance. have to yet figure a good signature... till then u can call me... Jay
wen i read da first stanza .. i thought as if ur tellin ur bf to let go .. more like a conversation : .. hehehehe .. anyway .. good effort .. try harder (honest opinion)
@ sharukh... THANKS MAN! @ jay.... AS LONG AS U TELL IT"S BY ME i am ok wid it...hehe ... do a recording and let me know i would like to lissen wat u did wid it! thanks man! @ notty .... THANKS FOR THE HONEST OPINION MAN! i appreciate it... honesty is wat i look for @ Garima..... THANKS AGAIN! always pleased wen u give a feed back! THANKS EVERYONE! really appreciate it!
