I ve Grown

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by bob-bobby, Nov 28, 2004.

  1. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    Neo / Essi / Zooom ,. i am sorry to post this song over here, you can move it to the poem forum if you want , but this was the very first song what i had composed and ever written , i wanted most of the ppl to read it i guess .. here it goes ,

    name of the song : I ve GROWN

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    Ive Grown

    There was a time , what a time it was ,
    meeting someone was a glory
    everyday a brand new story
    going to school was an excuse
    everything was an adventourous move....

    those mountains , those open skies ....
    those cool streams that caught my eyes,
    the togetherness, the happiness.........

    wheres everything when i open my eyes,....
    OH ! I ve GROWN ......

    what a time ? what a time !
    writin a letter was never a job
    but to impress the better half
    buying a present without a dime
    singing n playing without any ryhme...
    it was fun , everything was so very young...
    the day never passsed , enjoyed every day n nite ..
    everyday a new promise ,
    how the hell to keep them alive ...
    wheres everythin when i open my eyes
    OH NO !! I ve GROWN !! ...

    One Day came, sittin down the lane i cried
    called gods from heaven for help n try
    was tired of those times , those freakin timessss
    wanted to do something else,
    something better in life
    no voices heard , no evils cried,
    down came a thunder to accept my voice ,
    that was the end of times i smiled,
    what a fool i was , i didnt see disguised....


    who need those mountains , those open skies ,
    who need those cool streams to catch my eyess,
    to my happiness, my glorified soul,
    i laughed high, i shouted to all,
    all you people , OH My God , I ve GROWN......

    Now I have better times, no friends,
    happiness is there, whom to share,
    i go those roads , i come those roads,
    no ones there to hurt my soul,
    i needed it , i got it voiced,
    i accepted, the heavens tried,
    thought i travelled a distance ahead,
    forgot to measure the lost n said,

    you want to grow more i said to myself ,
    my own question tore me apart,
    happiness is there, whom to share,
    have i lost it , have i gained,
    i dunno , but i ve grown......


    if this is better , best is gone ,
    to a never come back land,
    to my self i calm , i ease ,...
    theres still someone , a tease ..
    no i dun wanna see...

    bring me my mountains , my open skies ,
    those cool streams to catch my eyes ,
    i beg for togetherness , glorious times
    gimme my times , gimmes my times,...
    i cry , i cry till the moment dies,
    a sultry voice was never again high.
    what a blunder i did to myself,
    my own wish to grow, a curse to myself ,

    wanna go back , no was now ......
    OH MY PEOPLE , I VE GROWN ...

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    wob : 28th nov 2004
    writer ; bob bobby bob ( igt )
     
  2. skaw

    skaw snooze

    n i thought u didn't noe how to write .... ^^^ nice stuff bobby
     
  3. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    scary stuff...wud hate to be in that postion man...loved it...abso-friggin-lutely amazing...hits a chord..in my heart as in......
    wud hate to be in that postion...
    good one man..gt8 one...
     
  4. jayanth

    jayanth <.: : Call Quits : :.>

    Surely YOuve Grown.. This is Cool..
     
  5. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    thanks ppl
     
  6. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Thats very nice bob... Something about it really touches the soul... Would make an excellent song...

    But, moved to Poetry forum...
     
  7. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Good job Bob. See, u can write and write well at that. keep going dude!!
     
  8. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    nice work bob
     
  9. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    i am working on the chords ,...

    it starts very slow and end of it bcom quite , v fast infact .... wanna try some variations too ...
     

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