Neo / Essi / Zooom ,. i am sorry to post this song over here, you can move it to the poem forum if you want , but this was the very first song what i had composed and ever written , i wanted most of the ppl to read it i guess .. here it goes , name of the song : I ve GROWN _______________________________________________________________ Ive Grown There was a time , what a time it was , meeting someone was a glory everyday a brand new story going to school was an excuse everything was an adventourous move.... those mountains , those open skies .... those cool streams that caught my eyes, the togetherness, the happiness......... wheres everything when i open my eyes,.... OH ! I ve GROWN ...... what a time ? what a time ! writin a letter was never a job but to impress the better half buying a present without a dime singing n playing without any ryhme... it was fun , everything was so very young... the day never passsed , enjoyed every day n nite .. everyday a new promise , how the hell to keep them alive ... wheres everythin when i open my eyes OH NO !! I ve GROWN !! ... One Day came, sittin down the lane i cried called gods from heaven for help n try was tired of those times , those freakin timessss wanted to do something else, something better in life no voices heard , no evils cried, down came a thunder to accept my voice , that was the end of times i smiled, what a fool i was , i didnt see disguised.... who need those mountains , those open skies , who need those cool streams to catch my eyess, to my happiness, my glorified soul, i laughed high, i shouted to all, all you people , OH My God , I ve GROWN...... Now I have better times, no friends, happiness is there, whom to share, i go those roads , i come those roads, no ones there to hurt my soul, i needed it , i got it voiced, i accepted, the heavens tried, thought i travelled a distance ahead, forgot to measure the lost n said, you want to grow more i said to myself , my own question tore me apart, happiness is there, whom to share, have i lost it , have i gained, i dunno , but i ve grown...... if this is better , best is gone , to a never come back land, to my self i calm , i ease ,... theres still someone , a tease .. no i dun wanna see... bring me my mountains , my open skies , those cool streams to catch my eyes , i beg for togetherness , glorious times gimme my times , gimmes my times,... i cry , i cry till the moment dies, a sultry voice was never again high. what a blunder i did to myself, my own wish to grow, a curse to myself , wanna go back , no was now ...... OH MY PEOPLE , I VE GROWN ... _______________________________________________ wob : 28th nov 2004 writer ; bob bobby bob ( igt )
scary stuff...wud hate to be in that postion man...loved it...abso-friggin-lutely amazing...hits a chord..in my heart as in...... wud hate to be in that postion... good one man..gt8 one...
Thats very nice bob... Something about it really touches the soul... Would make an excellent song... But, moved to Poetry forum...
i am working on the chords ,... it starts very slow and end of it bcom quite , v fast infact .... wanna try some variations too ...