I am a very strange girl present in the world, just the same as an oyster hides its pearl but the difference is tha i m not even capable to distinguish myself as a human or a pebble which is existing but senseless, motionless They say, i m very funny and r cheered just by my one laughter But in my life is this the only chapter??? NO I try hard to squeeze my emotions I bury them somerwhere inside the core of my heart so deeply that no one would feel it ever I have often been cheated n abused by others but quail, the draught of my tears I fell down at every step of my life and find no one to help me. SOWHAT????? I cannot show my emotions to disappoint someone let them be hidden for that my smile is the only curtain BUT... Whenever my eyes r drenched, I could feel a hand very soothing, very gentle cum to adorn my barren land Due to that sensation only I m here, alive just smiling the same for u, so that u can survive.
It's nicely expressed but somehow I'm just not a whole fan of the idea. I'm personally very expressive with people I'm comfortable and If I'm mad or upset around any of them, I show it. I don't believe in curtains really. That being said, it's just a personal choice and strength to you if this works for you. I also think that someone who is likely to be upset by my being upset is also likely to be upset with my not wanting to show in front of them that I am upset. Of course, there are certain situations where what you say holds true but God forbid I ever have to face one of them. I m here, alive just smiling the same for u, so that u can survive. lovely!
I agree with what u said guys....But it was only the beginning. I am in class XIth so I might not hav been so expressiver or else......Pls do keep commenting so that i could ponder over my mistakes n learn more from u all beautiful Bards!!!
^^ " I also think that someone who is likely to be upset by my being upset is also likely to be upset with my not wanting to show in front of them that I am upset."......set up-set shut set.sssssssss WoW....lol
so you're an 18 year old girl? I'd like to read you some poetry sometime <3 Calcuttan? please? About the poem, I think you're pretty good with the way you express yourself at least in words. And if this is the beginning, you can usually only get better so keep posting.