I try to squeeze my emotions

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Angira, Nov 13, 2007.

  1. Angira

    Angira New Member

    I am a very strange girl
    present in the world,
    just the same
    as an oyster hides its pearl
    but the difference is tha
    i m not even capable
    to distinguish myself
    as a human or a pebble
    which is existing
    but senseless, motionless

    They say, i m very funny
    and r cheered
    just by my one laughter
    But in my life
    is this the only chapter???
    NO
    I try hard
    to squeeze my emotions
    I bury them somerwhere
    inside the core of my heart
    so deeply that
    no one would feel it ever

    I have often been cheated
    n abused by others
    but quail,
    the draught of my tears
    I fell down at every step
    of my life and find
    no one to help me.
    SOWHAT?????
    I cannot show my emotions
    to disappoint someone
    let them be hidden
    for that
    my smile is the only curtain
    BUT...
    Whenever my eyes r drenched,
    I could feel a hand
    very soothing, very gentle
    cum to adorn my barren land
    Due to that sensation only
    I m here, alive
    just smiling the same for u,
    so that u can survive.
     
  2. fairandlovely

    fairandlovely peeka-boo

    It's nicely expressed but somehow I'm just not a whole fan of the idea. I'm personally very expressive with people I'm comfortable and If I'm mad or upset around any of them, I show it. I don't believe in curtains really. That being said, it's just a personal choice and strength to you if this works for you. I also think that someone who is likely to be upset by my being upset is also likely to be upset with my not wanting to show in front of them that I am upset. Of course, there are certain situations where what you say holds true but God forbid I ever have to face one of them.

    I m here, alive
    just smiling the same for u,
    so that u can survive.

    lovely!
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    i like the way it was written but same old storys shuld not start with onse upon a time....!
     
  4. Angira

    Angira New Member

    I agree with what u said guys....But it was only the beginning. I am in class XIth so I might not hav been so expressiver or else......Pls do keep commenting so that i could ponder over my mistakes n learn more from u all beautiful Bards!!!
     
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    ^^
    " I also think that someone who is likely to be upset by my being upset is also likely to be upset with my not wanting to show in front of them that I am upset."......set up-set shut set.sssssssss


    WoW....lol
     
  6. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    so you're an 18 year old girl?


    I'd like to read you some poetry sometime <3


    Calcuttan? please?


    About the poem, I think you're pretty good with the way you express yourself at least in words. And if this is the beginning, you can usually only get better so keep posting.
     
  7. Angira

    Angira New Member

    thanks for the comments n keep visiting
     

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