I witnessed something today that just depressed the heck out of me. As you who have gotten to know me are aware, I am a school bus driver. I'm driving summer kindergarten right now. I'm not allowed to go into details ,privacy laws and all, but today I had the misfortune to whitness very deeply ingrained predjudace in a 5 year old. Sad.......sad...so sad. I Thought Races Were for Fun You are a Brother And a Sister In the colors of Life Some people believe They are races Human races Whatever that may be Races are for running The competitive edge Distrust and confusion Leaving alterations In innocent little faces We are natural Life A part of Mother Earth's design A blending of colors To make the difference In the teaching of meanings We are colors in the family of Life Feedback Appreciated. Please comment.
this is great thought ..... We are natural Life A part of Mother Earth's design A blending of colors To make the difference ...................best lines reps comming ur way
nice work man! welcome to IGT! and yea i just saw ur first poem and i think u should re-rite it... i mean there is a lot of thought but u need to make the sentences a little more shorter and just try keeping them in a flow... otehrwise... KEEP POSTING! :beer:
