i talked with god....the poetry

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Sep 29, 2005.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    Yelling at God, i said.....see the world before you decide
    dont think as we are fool, we take all you throw in the stride ,
    what you think you have also lived the world as human
    you run away preaching for better world in the commune,
    as human we face the truth and reality,
    you say as differnt life of colour and variety,
    sometimes see those haunting days and nights.
    when we are helpless but cry for your soft sights..
    you says everything happens for betterment.
    then you runaway leaving the world and handle the management..
    God was watching me..he laughed again
    rohit now better be cool or i will start the playng the wild game..
    if you dont understand,its too early to say
    u lost somewhere and won too in your life's way
    look back did i ever refused you
    u asked the things that really doesnot matters to you..
    he blessed me hope and said me....
    look ahead to belive me.........

  2. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    wow......cooooooooool yaaaaaaaaaar!nice anger n some humour as well in da middle! :rock:ing!
  3. Rude_gal:)

    Rude_gal:) New Member

    nice poem...every one can relate to it
  4. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Nice poem Rohit :)
  5. hate_eternal

    hate_eternal Banned

    Very nice work. Rhyming scheme was good.
  6. Gaurav Bhatia

    Gaurav Bhatia New Member

    Rohit...nice job.....superb flow of thought........good
  7. diva

    diva Banned

    Nice but i liked the content more than the poetry.
  8. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    thanks to all who have appreciated the work..once again

  9. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    no more response.........hmmm


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