i remember ..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, Feb 16, 2012.

  1. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    a li'l painful to read...there's one line that even stretched two long...
    when writing like this(when your adjacent lines are not equally syllabic), is it really necessary to rhyme like you did? rather just concentrate on meaning, though its been well expressed here too..
     
  2. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member



    yea..i have been noticing this too .. i've started writing this way...and i am trying to write precisely these days ..
    anyways..thank you.. :)
     

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