I need to CRY once...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by zoomingrocket, Jan 13, 2006.

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  1. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR


    I left you few years ago...
    I passed by your life...
    I touched your heart...
    I hurt you...

    Life has moved on...
    But you still live in my hearts...
    I try to forget you...
    I try to erase those memories...
    I try to kill the moments spent..

    My efforts in vain...
    Everything keeps coming back to me...
    Haunts me off my sleep...

    Your memories are permanent...
    All I can do is sleep a dream...

    I need to CRY once.., as this heart never understands....


    Wrote above few lines last nite... Sharing with you all...

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
    zoomingrocket, Jan 13, 2006
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  2. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    Gee,
    u wrote that??
     
    UjSen, Jan 13, 2006
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  3. uj_6string

    uj_6string Nickelodean Addict :D


    uve got more than one heart.....lol:grin:....
     
    uj_6string, Jan 13, 2006
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  4. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    whoaa...

    dude I hope ur fine

    :grin:

    Nice work
     
    the_wizard, Jan 13, 2006
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  5. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    very nice :)
     
    #iR@, Jan 13, 2006
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  6. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :cry1: :cry2:.....ooooops I cried twice
    :grin: nothng...just wanted to mk u smile once...hope u did :):)

    beautiful poem....but cant rep u for that :(
     
    Garima, Jan 13, 2006
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  7. can_i_play

    can_i_play New Member

    achha lika hain....
     
    can_i_play, Jan 13, 2006
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  8. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    wow...nice poem zoom...
    reps 4 u:beer:
     
    Hardik, Jan 13, 2006
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  9. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Nice....

    Nicely written..................
     
    walk_alone, Jan 13, 2006
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  10. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    its a nice poem dear
    made me a bit numb..

    wont say much

    jus take care...Always..
     
    BubblyMartini, Jan 13, 2006
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  11. light_of_erindi

    light_of_erindi New Member

    kinda freestyle...feels very spontaneous....good one mod :)
     
    light_of_erindi, Jan 14, 2006
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  12. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    U said u wrote it last night .. dat means u didn't sleep (n also dat u don't sleep at nights) .. So dat sentence above ?? in ur poem ?? .. BHAI TU TO GAYA .. YEH CONFUSION "PYAAR" MEIN HI HOTA HAI :) :) :) :) u still love her it shows ;)
     
    notty_lad, Jan 15, 2006
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  13. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    zoom is in love.............whoa..........
     
    abhimanjrekar, Jan 16, 2006
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  14. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    @all: Thanks for reading few crap lines...
    @light_of_erindi: Yup...i believe in Originality...and those lines are written at the spur of the moment when i was actually feeling the stuff...
    @notty_lad: Yup...we are Night Hawks... Sleeping is not our duty! ;)
    "Wo poochte hai khwabo me kise dekhte ho.
    Hum hai ki ek umr se so-e hi nahi... " :)
    @abhi: Nopes.. aint in Love.. If you check back my earlier poems..you would find them written on same theme...

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
    zoomingrocket, Jan 16, 2006
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  15. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    ditto.....
     
    DrSaurabh, Jan 16, 2006
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  16. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Beautiful lines...... touched a few chords in me..... hmmmmm
     
    Varshita, Jan 19, 2006
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  17. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    ^^^Wat are those chords??? n which scale ?? perhaps i'l make a song ;)
     
    notty_lad, Jan 20, 2006
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  18. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    :phbbt:

    Down the memory lane......
     
    Varshita, Jan 20, 2006
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  19. Nanda

    Nanda Bassist

    All I can do is sleep a dream...
    nice line .........
    Simple but nice poem ........
     
    Nanda, Jan 20, 2006
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