This one is for my best friend…Aditi, who is in Pune/Mumbai I miss that caring touch I miss those soothing words I miss those eyes, Which use to get filled with tears Whenever you felt my pain Yes….I Miss You As I am lonely…once again I need that warm hug I need that shoulder to cry I need that smile Which use to convey That everything will be alright Yes…I need you As I am going that phase…yet again I remember that day When you were leaving And I had nothing to say My heart wanted to cry & say ‘please don’t go’ But I know you wanted to see the world You want to achieve more I did smile while saying ‘bye’ But deep in my heart There’s a space which keeps asking for you & it keeps reminding me That I miss you
touching.. wont say much..jus that i know how it feels its a beautiful poem take care dear.. **hugs**
ohhhhhhh so sweetttttt Itni senti poem yaar .....wd luv to see who this Aditi is maybe next time i wd write a poem for her. Nice nice poem.
@bubbly thanks dear.... @Pamposh...:annoyed: yea rite....u write poems for her nxt time.... @Ansh...thanks buddy...gud to see u here aftr a long time... @Trish....i kno, u miss who.. :
man .. before i used to write poems only for Gals i wanna go around wid : .. but great to see poems here for sisters n friends !? .. good goin garima .. Juz da thought of writin a poetry wid pure feelings is so good ..
@Harls ...thanx d00d @Notty...hmmmm issi baat pe mujhe yaad aya thats its been so many days...i hvn't seen ur poem...kya hua??? dint meet a gal for so long...with whom u wud wanna go around with :??? & yeah.....thanks :grin:
oi garry! its only been a few days since shes gone .. and you are already missing her!! ?? aww .. if there is anything naggin ya .. hit the PM button .. right now!!!! like the poem though ... its quite moving ...
