I miss you....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Jan 24, 2006.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    This one is for my best friend…Aditi, who is in Pune/Mumbai

    I miss that caring touch
    I miss those soothing words
    I miss those eyes,
    Which use to get filled with tears
    Whenever you felt my pain
    Yes….I Miss You
    As I am lonely…once again

    I need that warm hug
    I need that shoulder to cry
    I need that smile
    Which use to convey
    That everything will be alright
    Yes…I need you
    As I am going that phase…yet again

    I remember that day
    When you were leaving
    And I had nothing to say

    My heart wanted to cry
    & say ‘please don’t go’
    But I know you wanted to see the world
    You want to achieve more

    I did smile while saying ‘bye’
    But deep in my heart
    There’s a space which keeps asking for you
    & it keeps reminding me
    That I miss you
  2. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    touching.. :(
    wont say much..jus that i know how it feels
    its a beautiful poem
    take care dear..

  3. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    ohhhhhhh so sweetttttt

    Itni senti poem yaar .....wd luv to see who this Aditi is maybe next time i wd write a poem for her.

    Nice nice poem.
  4. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    good one garry!!
  5. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    awww... i miss a cpl of my frnds too :'(

    nice poem btw :)
  6. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @bubbly thanks dear....
    @Pamposh...:annoyed: yea rite....u write poems for her nxt time....
    @Ansh...thanks buddy...gud to see u here aftr a long time...
    @Trish....i kno, u miss who..;) :p:
  7. har1s

    har1s <b>Untitled</b>

    really nice poem garima... keep it up!
  8. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    man .. before i used to write poems only for Gals i wanna go around wid :p: .. but great to see poems here for sisters n friends !? .. good goin garima .. Juz da thought of writin a poetry wid pure feelings is so good .. :)
  9. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Harls ...thanx d00d :)
    @Notty...hmmmm issi baat pe mujhe yaad aya thats its been so many days...i hvn't seen ur poem...kya hua??? dint meet a gal for so long...with whom u wud wanna go around with :p:???
    & yeah.....thanks :grin:
  10. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    farewell feeling......nice work....

  11. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    :eek:: one jaadu ki jhaapi for u... :eek::
  12. #iR@


    aaawwww.... that was sooooo cute! :eek:: ...... good job gurl! :)
  13. shak

    shak Harrr!

    oi garry! its only been a few days since shes gone .. and you are already missing her!! ??
    aww .. if there is anything naggin ya .. hit the PM button .. right now!!!!

    like the poem though ... :) its quite moving ...
  14. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Rohit , Vishwa(miss u) , Hira, Shak Thanks buddies.....

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