I Love You

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by DesiPride143, Nov 26, 2004.

  1. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    I love you
    Tis’ very true.
    From the day one,
    I wanted to say
    This to you.

    Day one
    I saw someone
    Walking toward me
    And ignoring me like
    I was no one.

    Day two
    “What to do?”
    I asked that
    To my friends
    In return I got
    “forget ‘bout her
    You foo.”

    Day three
    Where is she
    Someone please
    tell me ‘cause
    I got something
    To tell thee.

    Day four
    No more
    I can take
    This pain
    Which has
    No cure.

    Day five
    Be wise
    Tis’ the day
    When I tell
    This girl that she
    Looks fine.

    Day six
    We’re fixed
    To go to
    a restaurant
    Named crisp.

  2. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    you foo, you don't tell a girl that she looks fine, you tell her that you're desperately in love with her.......what's wrong with you

    strange but very urban, intresting enough i guess.....but an indian girl would surely give you a swift slap on the face.....lol
  3. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Interesting poem:) Was nice to read though, very simple.
  4. lord_neo

    lord_neo Guest

    What happened on day seven?
  5. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Hey, yeah, that's a good question:) What happened the next day? I guess you could go on forever:p:
  6. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    a whole lot happened on day seven, which i do not wish to include :p:
  7. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    an indian girl might slap me if i tell here that she looks fine...but if i tell that to a white girl, she'll dig it, and u don't go tell that to some white cheeck that u love her at the first sight..c'mon
  8. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    :think: i see your point....
  9. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    But anyways, while you are at it, why don't you make ita point to tell us what a girl would appreciate.... it would help us all a lot. ;)
  10. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    u want to enter a dump i guess , sonali is gonna give you a rockin idea , shes a dude girl and if you try to apply her advise on a typical indian girl , u had it ...

  11. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    all i have to say abt that is :cen: :cen: :cen: :ban: :ban: :ban: :cool:
  12. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Good job desipride. Its great.

    @Sonali - LOL
  13. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    Well, an indian Girl - she would like it, if you follow her around and send messages through her friends to her (with personal experience) but, don't try to talk to her yet....wait for a reply from her friend(s)

    White Girl - go up to her and tell her u would like to take her out...simple. doesn't take much..trust me.. ;)
  14. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    she is not all that bad...she seem to understand...or did she :think:
  15. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

  16. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    whats that supposed to mean, foo think before you post....

    sorry, did i hurt your sweet desi heart? :p:
  17. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    i was replying to waht bob-bobby said.... :mad:
    yes, u did hurt my sweet desi heart..mommy... :p:
  18. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    she is not all that bad...she seem to understand... or did she :p: :p: :p:
  19. Mamasteen

    Mamasteen &lt;A-W-A-Y&gt;

    Man, I couldn't find Aziz at Crisp yaar. Is he cheating on me? hehehe
  20. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    once again i say :ban:^10000

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