I Love You

I love you
Tis’ very true.
From the day one,
I wanted to say
This to you.

Day one
I saw someone
Walking toward me
And ignoring me like
I was no one.

Day two
“What to do?”
I asked that
To my friends
In return I got
“forget ‘bout her
You foo.”

Day three
Where is she
Someone please
tell me ‘cause
I got something
To tell thee.

Day four
No more
I can take
This pain
Which has
No cure.

Day five
Be wise
Tis’ the day
When I tell
This girl that she
Looks fine.

Day six
We’re fixed
To go to
a restaurant
Named crisp.

Aziz

 

you foo, you don't tell a girl that she looks fine, you tell her that you're desperately in love with her.......what's wrong with you

strange but very urban, intresting enough i guess.....but an indian girl would surely give you a swift slap on the face.....lol

 

Interesting poem Was nice to read though, very simple.

 

What happened on day seven?

 

Hey, yeah, that's a good question What happened the next day? I guess you could go on forever:

 

a whole lot happened on day seven, which i do not wish to include :

 

an indian girl might slap me if i tell here that she looks fine...but if i tell that to a white girl, she'll dig it, and u don't go tell that to some white cheeck that u love her at the first sight..c'mon

 

:think: i see your point....

 

But anyways, while you are at it, why don't you make ita point to tell us what a girl would appreciate.... it would help us all a lot.

 

u want to enter a dump i guess , sonali is gonna give you a rockin idea , shes a dude girl and if you try to apply her advise on a typical indian girl , u had it ...

ALL THE VERY BEST !!!

 

all i have to say abt that is :cen: :cen: :cen: :ban: :ban: :ban:

 

Good job desipride. Its great.

@Sonali - LOL

 

Well, an indian Girl - she would like it, if you follow her around and send messages through her friends to her (with personal experience) but, don't try to talk to her yet....wait for a reply from her friend(s)

White Girl - go up to her and tell her u would like to take her out...simple. doesn't take much..trust me..

 

she is not all that bad...she seem to understand...or did she :think:

 

Gracious!!!

 

whats that supposed to mean, foo think before you post....


sorry, did i hurt your sweet desi heart? :

 

i was replying to waht bob-bobby said....
yes, u did hurt my sweet desi heart..mommy... :

 

she is not all that bad...she seem to understand... or did she : : :

 

Man, I couldn't find Aziz at Crisp yaar. Is he cheating on me? hehehe

 

once again i say :ban:^10000