As explained in the poem it seems that she is beautiful...not onli from outside but from Heart too....u rarely meet such people...no wonder that u Love her... & bout the poem...wat shud I say...that was the Loveliest/cutest/sweetest poem I have ever read.... & stop posting ur poems too often..... Cant rep u itni jaldi jaldi...: on evry poem of urs i feel like giving reps...then I realise that I rep u too often...: :
oooooooooooooooooo sooo pretty and cute, yet simple and beautiful....pity u never wrote for me! lol only kidding.....great stuff dear
She is lucky to have a guy like you love her so much. At times simple thoughts of our mind seem to fall so beautifully on paper. Very different from your previous poems. Good work bro
@Garima, lol, i'm not fishing for reps, i'm already a 'jewel in the rough' so to speak, hehe, thanks a lot for reading! @browneyegurlie, aww cutie, i would too, just dont have enough time these days. Thanks a lot for reading! @varshu didi, yeah, i love her truly, and i wanted her to know, so i put it in the best possible way i could I'm glad it came out well. Thanks a load!
:RollLol: The lines which u wrote shows how a person can be totally different with their Beloved. Its hard for me to imagine u've wrote those lines knowin yo nature towards people in general .. keep it up PS- She asked u why do u love her .. n U wrote so many lines .. perhaps she's realised she shouldn't ask u How u would wanna spend yo LIFE wid her
^I dont see why you're laughing first of all. Secondly i dont understand what you mean by "yo nature towards people in general", want to tell me a bit more about that? And i think i've already mentioned that she's bethrothed to another person. There's nothing about spending "muh" life with her.
^^^: .. boy u come harsh on me .. lemme clear muhself .. 1. I'm laughing coz it says chances are which also means chances are not .. krackjack 50-50 2. "yo nature towards people in general" - I've always perceived u as a light hearted .. jolly kinda fun guy .. n its different(in a pleasant way) to see u so romantic 3. muh PS was jz a friendly banter .. dint know u'd take muh whole post totally wrong from head to toe n hit me wid da "muh" scorn .. wat do i say now ..
^Muahahaha, fell for it hook line and sinker :grin: See the difference a smiley can make, if that above thing had a :grin: with it you wouldnt be so emo in your reply. lol, that was fun. Calm down dude : Thanks for reading the poem, much appreciated and oh yeah.............. sucker! :grin:
