I love you

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by d_ist_urb_ed, Apr 5, 2006.

  1. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Alright, this is not really a poem. A girl asked me why i loved her and i kind of just wrote this back to her, but another friend of mine noticed it had a remote poetic semblance to it and she made it to be that way, and so i'm posting it.......

    I love you

    You are a beautiful human being.
    You remind me of the blooming rose.
    The radiant beauty surrounding you,
    giving off a pulchritudinous glow.
    The depth of your soul
    and the warmth of your heart.
    The wonderful ringing laughter you have.
    Your beautiful eyes.
    The little intelligent head on your shoulders,
    the never ending resolve that you possess
    and the courage to fight everything
    while still living life to the fullest,
    and most of all,
    the ability to love anyone
    looking past their surface
    and into their existence.
    You are the sun and you are the moon darling.
    I have never met anyone like you before
    and chances are never after.
    You are you and i love you.
  2. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~


    U know these three words are the most beautiful words which make the most beautiful sentence...... And it's the title of ur poem....... REPS, Bro!
  3. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    You love that word, don't ya?;) ...
    very nice poem....really really really nice:)...Now, who is the gal:think:
  4. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^Yeah, my favorite word ever. The gal is stefanie.
  5. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    i guessed right..for both matters:);)
  6. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^What can i say, you're a very perceptive girl.
  7. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Who is Stefanie? Is she also a member of IGT?
  8. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^If only she was....
  9. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    I cud not get ur point.....
  10. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    ^arre..she is not in IGT..she is sarat's best friend..and much more;)
  11. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    damn! i wish it were abt me :grin:

    It's so simple and beautiful, I love it :)
  12. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^:grin: *hug* sweety, lol it was simply a reply to a question, that's all
  13. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    its beautiful and i love it
    donno why everyone's writing love poems at the same time.. :)
  14. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    nice one indeed...itsamazing in how many diff ways we can say i love you.
  15. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Beautiful poem bro...
    Really nice and simple...

  16. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    love deviated you from ur dark stuff...;)
  17. #iR@


    lovely! dude shes lucky! very lucky indeed! reps...
  18. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^Thanks to every single person who's read this "poem" and appreciated. I owe you an explanation of sorts. As i stated before this is not a poem but simply a reply to her question. The context is this. I dont really care about girls in terms of relationships and i prefer to be a loner. Stefanie and me were having a conversation about that yesterday and she said i'd be running after girls soon. I told her that, that was a distant possibility and only if i met a girl like her would i consider deviating from my principles. And so her question was, "Why do you love/what do you see in me that would make you want to come back to girls if you met someone like me?" and i gave her this answer. I'm glad you guys liked it.
    (P.S Steffy already has a boyfriend, and ironically, he's an indian dude :mad:)
  19. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    'u r the sun and u r the moon'
    touchy lines...
  20. uj_6string

    uj_6string Nickelodean Addict :D

    the best lines!
    nice poem!:beer:

Share This Page