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Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Varshita, Feb 27, 2006.

  1. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^Being a female aint bad...well you have PMS...but...(i'm gonna get so flamed for that)
     
  2. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    @ slash.. oops ok SOMESH. will keep that in mind :)

    @ disturbed... :mad: :mad:
     
  3. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^:p: :grin: Sorry, lol, hahaha
     
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Leaving me in a dilemma
    For the decision lied in me
    Past that I loved and future that I love
    Love both ways
    This time you had questions in your mind
    ............................................................well thought.....nicely expressed:)
     
  5. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    This poem has come real close to what i had in mind. Quite exactly what i thought of... I m glad you liked it... Thanks :)
     
  6. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Varshu-
    Its really commendable that you've put see-thru words in your poem
    Its said people play with words but their more like a double edged sword most of the times
    good you've vented your feelings....

    good work babe!
    Take care!
     
  7. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thanks martina..:) though this poem was not intended for venting my feelings out..but it seems that way. Its just a plain expression of what i had in mind.
     
  8. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    I agree with u...totally.
    again it ends with a positive note....which m kinda liking in ur recent poems...:grin:
    reps for this...i kno i cant rep u rite now...but whnevr i can....i wud...:):)
     
  9. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thanks garima.... Though this time the happy ending wasnt planned for. It just happenned !!
    Maybe .. its a new world.. its a new start... :)
     
  10. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    A better world....A new journey...with new u(a lil more experienced with the world;)) so its definetly gonna b the best :grin: Thats wat i hope for ya .....keep writing :)
     
  11. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thank you :)
     
  12. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs &amp; Pasta

    Hey, nice poem (didnt see thid for so mych time? :think: )

    Nice to see some negativity turned strength poem.
     
  13. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    @shsnawada.. i m glad u liked it...Thanks dude.. .. Its better late than never :)
     
  14. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    hmmmm.....ok..gotchya

     
  15. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Good... :)
     
  16. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    hmm

    is it based on a true life incident?
    ya phir yeh kahaani poori filmy hai


    whtever, nice poem
     
  17. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    ^^ lol
    Thats for you to guess. Thank you so much for reading :)
     
  18. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    Really amazing varshu didi:p: .....just outta words to praise u...:nw: :nw:
    And, i Really like the theme of the poem:beer: ;) its something different than usual...:)...Keep writing....U r blessed with that talent...:nw:
     
  19. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    oye is that Tifa Lockhart from final fantasy in your avatar??
     
  20. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    @ angela.. aww thats so weet of you. thanks

    @ wizzy... No I dont think so. But then u never know. The name of this pic when i downloaded it was Scylla%20ssCharibdys. So i have no clue.
     

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