i liked it . .

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, Dec 7, 2012.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    not mine..i read it smwhere.. i liked it so i am sharing..

    Forget his name, forget his face
    Forget his kiss and his warm embrace
    Forget the love that once came true
    Remember now there's someone new,

    Forget the love that you once shared
    Forget the face that had once cared
    Forget the time you spent together
    Remember now he's gone forever,

    Forget you cried the whole night through
    Forget him when they play your song
    Forget how close you two once were
    Remember now he's chosen her,

    Forget you memorized his walk
    Forget the way he used to talk
    Forget the times he was mad
    Remember he's happy instead of sad,

    Forget his teasing, gentle ways
    Forget you saw him everyday
    Forget he made your dreams come true
    Remember now she loves him too,

    Forget the thrill when he walked by
    Forget him when he made you cry
    Forget the way he spoke your name
    Remember now he's not the same,

    Forget the way he said he loved you
    Forget the way he kissed and hugged you
    Forget all those nights when he held you tight
    Remember now he holds her tonight,

    Forget all those sunny days
    Forget all those poems he made
    Forget those times through good and bad
    Remember he said he'd never make you sad,

    Forget the games he played with you
    Forget the times he stayed with you
    Forget those cold, cold nights
    Remember now he keeps her warm tonight,

    Forget the way he looked at you
    Forget you kissed the whole night through
    Forget all your dreams came true
    REMEMBER, that he doesn't love you.
  2. i liked it too..

    but the poem in the end is a bit unfair to the guy... its a girls words her thoughts
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    yes but its her version.maybe it is copletely diffrent for the guy . maybe the irl is assuming things..could be entirely diff..but this is just hw she feels..
  4. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Maybe the guy loves both equally ...
  5. alpha is Right ..:D
  6. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Is she boasting her 'matured'ness?
    Poetically, it's good. But cold. I've seen a lot of people doing that. Show-off to others how sacrificing and compromising they are.
    Either you hate someone for leaving you or forget. What's the point in convincing yourself to be happy because he/she's happy?
    It's demeaning.
  7. ^ Maturedness ..nah to be matured is quite different its like when u start understanding others much more..but many confuse this..
  8. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    My point, though, is many people try to fake it.
  9. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    Made absolutely no sense to me...
  10. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    That is not possible...
  11. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Are you a girl?
  12. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

  13. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Because the "That is not possible" can be uttered only by a woman, in this context ...
  14. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    You are free to assume that I'm a woman... in this context...

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