I just want to make u smile..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by vishwa_81us, Dec 2, 2005.

  1. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    Koool.... thank u so much for ur contributions..

    I will tell u one truth.. evry person has a poet inside him/her.. wat u need a motivation to bring out that poet.. i m happy here because atleast i m able to do that to some extent... :)


    But.............. YEH DIL MANGE MORE ................


    so frnds keep contributing.. thanx ansh.. garima.. rocksta .. BJR .. & ofcourse CRYPTI..


    all verses will be added..
     
  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    vishwa u didnt add ^^^ :grin:
     
  3. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    ^^^^ sorry crypti :eek:: .. missed it.. now added
     
  4. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    i'll try n come up with smthng funnier but 4 now.. m off to study for my end-sems :eek::

    :cry2:
     
  5. rocksta

    rocksta Live Fast Die Young

    man ..my gfs gonna tear me if she sees wat i wrote..neways gonna wrk ma brains fer sum mo...nice stuff vish..appriciate.
     
  6. rocksta

    rocksta Live Fast Die Young

    crypti...was it ewwwwww or was it perfect?decide 1
     
  7. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    why cant it be both... the bile thng was ewwww but the verse was just perfect for the poem
     
  8. rocksta

    rocksta Live Fast Die Young

    hmmm..any mo wrds endin in -ile?
     
  9. rocksta

    rocksta Live Fast Die Young

    ok..wat bout sum hardcore stuf..?see wat yall think..jus sum experimentation ok?

    luv i know ur not into s&m
    but babe dats the way iam
    seein u cry sure makes me smile
    I am saying this cos
    I just want to make u smile
     
  10. rocksta

    rocksta Live Fast Die Young

    cmhere honey lemme hold you tight
    we can act like we jus had a big fight
    and fight we will in a while
    I am saying this cos
    I just want to make u smile
     
  11. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned


    wat is that s&m ???
     
  12. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    sadism and machoism
     
  13. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    :NoNo: i wont
     
  14. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    u wont what??
     
  15. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    ^^
    okie dokie? :)
     
  16. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    LOL.. why not?
     
  17. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    wats bad in that..
     
  18. rocksta

    rocksta Live Fast Die Young

    hey vish u got wats s&m?
     
  19. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    ..........
     
  20. rocksta

    rocksta Live Fast Die Young

    yea..but i meant did he understand wat sadism and masochism means`?
     

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