Last night I heard a star weeping… . ..I wanted to run away for not hearing it anymore but I didn't find a finish line to put an end to my heeding. So I remained immovable, With my head laid on a cold pillow and the echo of this weeping in my ears … I heard this cry originating from far… and, though I wanted to, I had not been able to give it an answer. I wanted to take as flight… the wind but it did not want to transport me to the source of that solitary call… from where that star wailed all its pain to the earth. The power of the sky made fun of my limits Laughing at these feet of mine… Which without wings, so piteously anchored to the earth, could not reach it… I got up from the warmth of the bed and looked out of the window searching for that star that, with its cry, had wakened up the slumber of my heart bringing back memories of some enfeebled words from beyond the sea … Then I understood that … There are pains that poison the heart and that laugh in front of our illusions… and love, for its every breath, always asks in exchange a fragment of the soul… I threw down to the ground this desire of mine to understand more knowing that too many questions die without any answer… and too many answers kill what they could have rescued... . How many more nights will your existence in my silences bring the agony of a weeping that can't get placated…? How many words does a tear contain…? How many tears will remain dumb while meeting their destiny on the floor…? To Be Continued... ( May be ) Amanush...
amazing understanding of the word agony and helplessness. But inspiring at the same time to wipe a tear or two or help out a sad soul. thnk u for this amazing piece of work.
oh i loved it...so good..u have an amazing talent in utilizing the words to express feelings and creating an image ....... esp the last one..too good....*wiping two tears that juz came out of my eyes*.... reps for ya....u deserve more than that though :beer: :beer: :nw: :nw:
too good man...outta words...u deserve more and you are A TRULY GIFTED POET!!! :secret: learning from you :secret: Sharmontime [TM]
[/B] its beautiful! too many questions do die without an answer.. the poems simply beautiful dear.. it tugs the heart strings..
Very well-written. My only complaint would be that you tend to ramble on in places but your words are beautiful enough for us not to notice.