' I heard A Star Weeping...! '

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Amanush..., Feb 7, 2006.

  1. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Last night I heard a star weeping…
    . ..I wanted to run away for not hearing it anymore
    but I didn't find a finish line to put an end
    to my heeding.
    So I remained immovable,
    With my head laid on a cold pillow
    and the echo of this weeping in my ears …

    I heard this cry originating from far…
    and, though I wanted to, I had not been able
    to give it an answer.
    I wanted to take as flight… the wind
    but it did not want to transport me
    to the source of that solitary call…
    from where that star wailed all its pain
    to the earth.

    The power of the sky made fun of my limits
    Laughing at these feet of mine…
    Which without wings,
    so piteously anchored to the earth,
    could not reach it…

    I got up from the warmth of the bed
    and looked out of the window
    searching for that star that, with its cry,
    had wakened up the slumber of my heart
    bringing back memories
    of some enfeebled words from beyond the sea …

    Then I understood that …

    There are pains that poison the heart
    and that laugh in front of our illusions…
    and love, for its every breath,
    always asks in exchange
    a fragment of the soul…

    I threw down to the ground
    this desire of mine to understand more
    knowing that too many questions die
    without any answer…
    and too many answers kill
    what they could have rescued...
    How many more nights
    will your existence in my silences
    bring the agony of a weeping
    that can't get placated…?
    How many words does a tear contain…?
    How many tears will remain dumb
    while meeting their destiny on the floor…?

    To Be Continued... ( May be )


  2. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.


    if u keep writting that...how cud i rep u everytime?????
  3. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    really nice....
  4. anamika

    anamika New Member

    amazing understanding of the word agony and helplessness. But inspiring at the same time to wipe a tear or two or help out a sad soul. thnk u for this amazing piece of work.
  5. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thats a lovely play of words !! Good work...
  6. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    oh i loved it...so good..u have an amazing talent in utilizing the words to express feelings and creating an image .......
    esp the last one..too good....*wiping two tears that juz came out of my eyes*....
    reps for ya....u deserve more than that though :beer: :beer: :nw: :nw:
  7. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    too good man...outta words...u deserve more and you are A TRULY GIFTED POET!!!

    :secret: learning from you :secret:

    Sharmontime :cool: [TM]
  8. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM


    its beautiful!
    too many questions do die without an answer.. :(

    the poems simply beautiful dear..
    it tugs the heart strings..
  9. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    Very well-written. My only complaint would be that you tend to ramble on in places but your words are beautiful enough for us not to notice.
  10. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    good in superlative degrees....

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