I dont know you...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by zoomingrocket, Dec 14, 2006.

  1. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Hello everyone,
    Posting a poem after a long time...
    Wrote this one 2-3 weeks back...

    I see through you,
    But i dont understand you...
    I talk with you,
    But i dont know you...

    Its hard to believe,
    Difficult to trust...
    You are the one,
    N i am unknown...

    Sleepless nights have gone,
    To hear your voice...
    Endless hours,
    Pondering your well being...

    I dont blame you,
    Cos i love you...
    I am the victim,
    N i care for you...

    I am hurt,
    But i enjoy the pain...
    Your parting tears,
    Touch my soul...

    All these memories,
    Plays as flashback...
    Still i dont understand you,
    I dont know you...

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
    zoomingrocket, Dec 14, 2006
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    i'm_not_neo, vini, g0g0l and 1 other person like this.
  2. nazr

    nazr angel is my genital..

     
    nazr, Dec 14, 2006
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  3. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    simple words that fit so well

    really good work zoom
     
    .:SpY_GaMe:., Dec 14, 2006
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  4. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    lovely poem!!
     
    nimisha, Dec 14, 2006
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  5. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    simple yet deep... luved reading it! :)
     
    #iR@, Dec 14, 2006
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  6. g0g0l

    g0g0l ! SpAm

    Good one!! :)
     
    g0g0l, Dec 14, 2006
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  7. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Really liked the poem esp. the first stanza...says a lot.
     
    i'm_not_neo, Dec 14, 2006
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  8. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    this ought to be a state of mind work..haan? :)

    reps
     
    vini, Dec 15, 2006
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  9. zicky5608

    zicky5608 Power Shortage

    Excellent work man..feels like you wrote it in 2 minutes.

    Perfection.
     
    zicky5608, Dec 15, 2006
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  10. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    I am the victim,
    N i care for you...

    i actually hate these diying crying missing u kinda stuff...but urs is a bit different
    I am hurt,
    But i enjoy the pain..................this is what makes it different so good attempt !
     
    madhuresh, Dec 15, 2006
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  11. god of guitar85

    god of guitar85 GUITARPLAYER

    really good mam. loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
    god of guitar85, Dec 17, 2006
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  12. rocker_vish

    rocker_vish New Member

    oye..gr8 work yaar
     
    rocker_vish, Dec 23, 2006
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  13. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e <3V/S<3 50 CeNt$

    /!/ice effort men !
     
    sanju_strings, Dec 23, 2006
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