i cry....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by $cReWdR!veR, Sep 5, 2005.

  1. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    Everytime you speak
    You hurt me with your words of hate.
    Everytime you speak
    I die a little inside.
    Tears well up inside me
    Then you speak again.
    The tears are welling up in my eyes
    Once again your words of hate fill the air.
    The tears are now rolling down my cheeks
    You laugh as my tears hit the floor.
    Now that you are no longer near
    I would think that there would be no more tears.
    But your hurtful words stll haunt me loud and clear.
    Then I hear your laugh and see your face
    This image I can not erase.
    So I just cry
    And cry some more.
    Until I care about you no more.
    cYpHeR likes this.
  2. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    ha ... liked it ...
    but then am not in my sane senses today .. so better i'll reread and comment tomorrow ...
  3. $AINT

    $AINT Banned

    it seems pyar me dhoka case.. don't cry.. let him cry... why shud u when he doesn't care for u..
  4. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    good one..
    nice job.
  5. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    gud poem bud
  6. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    hey $AINT don't try to impress my $CREW .. she was crying bcoz of me.. Now i m back.. so keep ur sympathy out.. :mad:
  7. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    ^ take a hike dude ...
  8. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    well, i can't believe screw would cry....it's not possible.......
    she seems to be a tough girl.....
  9. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    nice one...
  10. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    i too wuudve cried ... but its just that my lacrimal gland has run outta supply ...
    kinda liked the poem ...
  11. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Good one $crew....I hope no action replay of this in ur life :)
    Keep smiling
  12. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    keep smiling :)
  13. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    hehe....thanks for likin this one...
    @guitarangela....ya iv made myself pretty tough now.......
    @garima.......i do smile more than cry...
    @vishwa....u bac man.....and.... :p:
  14. #iR@


    pretty nice work there screw! keep em coming! :beer:
  15. cute_gal

    cute_gal New Member

    i like ur poem screw... it reminds me of my affair... but its life,take it easy. Time is the best healer.
    promise me u wont cry...
    we all r wth u sweetie
  16. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    just see the leve lof crap here:

    point to be noted, my lord, is that both are same person ...
  17. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    u mean fake id's??
  18. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    read da confessions thread for more info on $aint
  19. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned


    this is the limits ...
    someting must be done ...

    i have few other ppl on hunch ... they seem to be alter egos ...
  20. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    nice poem..
    i've read it before...

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