I Am Ready....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Feb 24, 2006.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Hi Guys….Jo beet gayee wo baat gayee is wat I believe…so whatevr happennd ....happennd for the good…it adds to ur experience aftr all ;)
    Here I am….keeping my promise to an extent….its an optimistic poem…. I think first of its kind from me….hope to write on similar lines thru out… I mean positive poems....

    Thanks to Angela, Mohsin(Notty), Varshita, Shak & Trishna...for helping me coming bk to normal..


    Aye Zindgi
    Ek baar phir mai tayyar hoon
    Tujhe gale lagan eke liye
    Muskurane ke liye

    Aaj ek toot-ta tara dekha
    Aur dil ne ek khwahish ki
    Aaj aankh se ek aansu tapka
    Wo kissi ki kii hui bewafaii thi
    Par tab bhi aye zindgi
    Ek baar phir mai tayyar hoon
    Tujhe hansane ke liye
    Muskurane ke liye

    Aaj dil me ek dard hua
    Kissi ke bichhadne ka dukh mehsoos hua
    Toh kya hua agar koi dil tod gaya
    Raahoan me wada nibhaye bina akela chhod gaya
    Par tab bhi aye zindgi
    Ek baar phir mai tayyar hoon
    Tera saath nibhane ke liye
    Muskurane ke liye……


    written by Bharat:

    Aye zindagi main tayyar hoon
    nayee manzilein talashne ke liye
    naye armaan sajane ke liye
    phir se muskurane ke liye

    Aaj saalon baad khud ke liye jee kar dekha
    aur khud se ek baar poochh kar dekha
    Kyun bahaye aansoo kisi ki yaad mein tadapne ke liye
    khuda ne banaya mujhe hass kar ibaadat karne ke liye
    ek baar phir main tayyar hoon
    zindagi tujhe galay lagane ke liye
    muskurane ke liye


    Thank you for reading :cool:

    *Cudnt find a better title....english title aur hindi poem,,,lol*

    EDIT: Forgot to add some important names here....
     
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  2. mudgalbharat

    mudgalbharat Silence Must be Heard

    Aye zindagi main tayyar hoon
    nayee manzilein talashne ke liye
    naye armaan sajane ke liye
    phir se muskurane ke liye

    Aaj saalon baad khud ke liye jee kar dekha
    aur khud se ek baar poochh kar dekha
    Kyun bahaye aansoo kisi ki yaad mein tadapne ke liye
    khuda ne banaya mujhe hass kar ibaadat karne ke liye
    ek baar phir main tayyar hoon
    zindagi tujhe galay lagane ke liye
    muskurane ke liye
     
  3. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Beautiful poem...and a nice title to too.. :)
    Keep writing..


    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  4. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Nice

    another nice one Garima.

    Bharatmudgal u dint comment...iam kinda confused.
     
  5. mudgalbharat

    mudgalbharat Silence Must be Heard

    Hi

    just replied to Garima's poem with a poem...

    - Bharat
     
  6. abhijeet_k

    abhijeet_k New Member

    great work again.....

    but cat stop thinking of title..?????

    any ways....

    keep it up....
     
  7. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Bharat...thanks alot....do u mind if I add those lines in the poem...they r lovely.

    @Thanks zoom....thank u for giving it a try to find a title:)

    @Pamposh ...Abhijeet Thanks alot for reading :)
     
  8. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    u gotta change your location babe..
    somehow i dont like it...

    and i dont qualify to tell u anything
    jus take care
    Keep Writing as zoom always says
    most importantly Dont Change!
    dont let anything change you

    The poem's good..:)
     
  9. mudgalbharat

    mudgalbharat Silence Must be Heard

    @Garima Sure you can add them up in your poem. Keep smiling.
     
  10. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    Aaj,
    Aaj ek hasi aur pi lo,
    Aaj ek zindagi aur ji lo,
    Aaj ek dua aur maang lo,
    Aaj , bus aaj,
    Kya pata....
    KAL HO NA HO........

    Garryyy....good to see u in positive frame....now don ya ever go on the other side....neva eva...jus lock tht door and send me the key....il lose it somewher so thth u always stay on the bright zone....good poem as usual...need not say tht...and live life as if ther is no tomorrow....ul find how beautiful it is among ur people those who care for u...jus coz of some suckas, y do u hold urself alwayz.....damn them....move ahead....ur peeps will be ther with u always and ther l be new more waitin to join u in the next walks of life.........be happy......

    aillaaa...quite a big lecture...heheheh....keep writing......

    psst psst:: wen do ya sleep????? i saw ur posts at 4 am, 1 am..and u work frm say 9 to 6......hmmmmmm........everready battery hain kya ???.........
     
  11. abhi_lovespooja

    abhi_lovespooja New Member

    hey garima
    nice poem....
    m really very happy to see u in good and cheerful mood...
    always be happy and full of life.....
    abhi
     
  12. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&

    Am so moved,.....
     
  13. rock all

    rock all New Member

    hey good one!
     
  14. rock all

    rock all New Member

    nice

    nice poem very true in this time when ur own love cannot be yours... but it takes time to get over...
     
  15. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    I give my comments to your poem when u read them out to me on phone... which leaves me with no words to praise here :)
    So even if i reply late.. i m the first one who gets to hear it
    Good one !!

    ps: no need to thank me... what are friends for ?? :)
     
  16. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @bharat...thanks alot.

    @martina....sure i wont change :) & yeah, wud shft soon from Hell to somewhere else...just luking around fr a perfect location ;) Thanks fr the concern sweetie:)

    @abhi...i do wrk frm 9-6 the onli difference is in a.m & p.m....so when u see my post m in office @that time...yeah, its 9p.m-6a.m:eek::

    @abhi...its a pleasure to see ur post in all my poetry threads....thanks ALOT

    @akkyy....neva mind...thanks fr reading though (If u hv read it)

    @rock all...i agree...time is the best cure..Thanks

    @Varshita....now it seems that u r the first one to listen to my poems...lol.
    :secret: not thanking u this time.....
     
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  17. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    I wonder why i keep missing all the good stuff :mad: Very nice work :grin:
     
  18. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    dodo, u work or write poems in office????hehe...:p: :p:
     
  19. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    pyaar se log mujhe Zindagi ke naam se bulate hain
     
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  20. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Sarat...its better to b late than neva ;) thanx for reading :)

    @Abhi...office mein kaam bhi hota hai :think:....acchhaa??? well, kal se kaam bhi kar lenge :p: he he he

    @Wiz .... here it comes *HUG* :grin: khush???
     

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